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Existence

awkwardly I dance
because I have two left feet
hard to find partner

I watch you dancing
it seems you have two right feet
let us share some shoes

will you follow me
for if we move together
dance will have purpose

you move fluidly
my feet provide the structure 
made for each other

no limitations 
with artistry and purpose
we dance with the stars

life is not boring
we live within the rhythm 
music from heaven

God is our maestro
leading us to forever
in death we won't part

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/11/2018 7:31:00 PM
Great job done !
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/12/2018 12:30:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 8/8/2015 4:07:00 PM
a deep writ Rick so much between your lines hugs 7
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Date: 7/25/2015 10:15:00 PM
I have always to told my wife that my ancestors came to America on the wallflower. Even so, I did enjoy this dancing synryu. Well done.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/26/2015 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Michael. Cute response!
Date: 7/23/2015 11:48:00 PM
I did not know this form of poetry genre. As the master of poetry you are you did a beautiful job. I was just wondering if there was a reason for no capitalization? As always a 7! You are a versatile poet talented with many types of poetry. Mine are all rhyme. Thank you once again.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/24/2015 12:12:00 AM
Mainly because it is an Asian form and like a haiku I have not used capital letters.
Date: 7/22/2015 10:50:00 PM
Absolutely stunning set of senryus.. Really enjoyed reading:) Always Laura a fav for sure!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/23/2015 7:46:00 AM
Thanks Laura, you are sweet.
Date: 7/7/2015 1:17:00 PM
This is just beautiful, jill
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/23/2015 7:46:00 AM
Thanks Jill.
Date: 7/4/2015 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful esquisit verse. Hugs Eve
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 1:17:00 PM
Thanks Eve! enjoy your weekend.
Date: 7/4/2015 11:39:00 AM
I love what you did here,Exquisite !
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 12:04:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine. Hugs Rick.
Date: 7/4/2015 10:56:00 AM
awesome! This is my fave one. Congrats ,Rick!! :O))
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 12:05:00 PM
You are sweet, thanks.
Date: 7/4/2015 8:28:00 AM
Can't help but smile after reading your poems..congrats to you! BG
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 9:16:00 AM
Thank Barb.
Date: 7/4/2015 1:24:00 AM
Great witness and congrats on your win!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:53:00 AM
Thanks Ed.
Date: 7/3/2015 10:57:00 PM
Richard congratulations on your wonderful win
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Constance.:0)
Date: 7/3/2015 10:12:00 PM
Superb passionate senryu Richard!Congrats on ur win!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Upma.
Date: 7/3/2015 6:46:00 PM
Richard, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:55:00 AM
Much appreciated SKAT.
Date: 7/3/2015 6:32:00 PM
Great romantic write. Congratulations, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Lycia.
Date: 7/3/2015 6:23:00 PM
Richard,, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:56:00 AM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 7/3/2015 4:45:00 PM
I see the judge is a romantic. Sure wish I had known that when I did this challenge. haha. BIG congrats on a well deserved win.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:56:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, much appreciated.
Date: 7/3/2015 4:39:00 PM
Richard, obviously one of the best.. Congrats on this fabulous winning write!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:57:00 AM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 7/3/2015 4:27:00 PM
A beautiful story told in this string of senryu, Richard! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:58:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I am not that familiar with the form so I am pleased to be chosen.
Date: 7/3/2015 12:13:00 PM
Brilliant string of Senryu with profound message! Congratulations, Rick, on a wonderful win! Pandita
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:58:00 AM
Thanks Pandita, so pleased you enjoyed them.
Date: 7/3/2015 6:48:00 AM
When I dance I feel like I've got clown shoes on. Congrats Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:59:00 AM
Ha ha, thanks Keith.
Date: 7/3/2015 4:44:00 AM
Congratz Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:59:00 AM
Thanks Marvin.
Date: 7/1/2015 2:24:00 PM
Bravo Richard! An impressive and creative string of senryu, with a smart introduction and then you dance on to the perfect ending. #7 // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 8:00:00 AM
You are kind Paul.
Date: 7/1/2015 9:20:00 AM
Richard, lovely strings that individually they can stand too.. =)~Olive ELoisa
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 8:02:00 AM
I'm glad, that was my goal.
Date: 7/1/2015 8:28:00 AM
Loved the title wordplay, Rick. More, the content in this string. Should do well in the contest. You have a lifetime to continue the dance.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 8:03:00 AM
That is my hope. Thanks Kim.
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