Exile

Exiled from my distant homeland, Where the days seemed bright, Nights seemed peaceful and nice, Where I longed for freedom and dignified life. With dictators and militia in charge, Where corruption and killings were at large, Any opposition voice was crushed, Freedom, Oh freedom, was only a dream. With imminent arrest and execution, Fleeing the beloved country was only option, Somehow escaped incognito thru night wilderness, Hitched many rides, got transported in boxes and tank containers, Took wretched overloaded ferries, till I reached a free land. Now I was a refugee seeking asylum, Spent time in camps with miserable living conditions, Finally, after three years, I was granted asylum, I was free in an unknown world. Still, I am actively seeking freedom for my homeland folks, Freedom of speech, and democracy is a precious thing, We will arouse sentiments of local folks to get their rights, Do not cry my homeland, one day you will be free. 4/29/23 contest Writing Challenge-Words with "X" sponsor Constance La France "EXILE"

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Date: 4/28/2023 12:29:00 PM

I too have chosen this topic. Your poem is heartfelt with mixed emotions, showing your determination and bravery and the lament to have left behind what and whom you love. In a way I wish I hadnt read your poem. I will make sure I continue to follow a different path as I complete mine. Your excellent poem sets a very high bar Jay.