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Exhaltation

the day exhales once
small truths drift toward silence
nothing asks for more

10th grade11th grade12thsenryu

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Deb M

September 9, 2026 at 5:28 AM

Belated Congrats Sara on your simply beautiful POTD! Debx

Kim Rodrigues

August 23, 2026 at 7:18 PM

Congrats, Sara, on POTD!

Abdullah Alhemaidy

August 22, 2026 at 1:01 AM

Hello Sara Etgen-Baker :-) Congratulations on your very nice senryu POTD! Have a nice day, blessings ~ AA

Daisy Meadows

August 21, 2026 at 11:29 PM

Congratulations on your POTD.Well done.

Brandy Nicole

August 21, 2026 at 8:34 PM

' small truths drift toward silence. ' Such a beautiful thought, my dear friend. Moments are like the wind in many ways. Congratulations Sara, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Christuraj Alex

August 21, 2026 at 8:26 PM

Your poem captures a profound moment of existential peace and acceptance. It focuses on the transition from the busyness of life to a state of quiet stillness. Congratulations!

Alison A Smith nee Howarth

August 21, 2026 at 6:02 PM

Back to congratulate you on your POTD 🍾💐

Benjamin Bartley

August 21, 2026 at 6:01 PM

Deep. Worthy POTD. My small truth may be that I'm not worthy. Ha! Thanks for sharing.

Christopher Delegans

August 21, 2026 at 5:13 PM

Great senryu, Sara! Congratulations on POTD!

Paula Goldsmith

August 21, 2026 at 12:37 PM

Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Exhaltation" write. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............