Exertion Epiphany

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Written: January 19, 2024
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Wondrous cymbals
in choral harmony
enraged scarlet wing beats
in a fierce rhapsody!
Countless moments
strung together.
Echoes pelt,
of unfulfilled desires
a minute hand race
without a tether
horizon turns a fuchsia shade
as mauve
streaks paint a show
purple dreams
catch fire and glow.
Swirling seraphic sways
while you glide
on ethereal waves
euphoric whirls of
azulene loops
euphuistic?

Fantasies swirl
in the velvet eyes
As the sliver
of the moon alights
The blushing sunset
rekindles yearnings
Zephyr is honeyed
by the lavender petals
Fragrant allegories
smote my essence
A velvet cloak of dreams
dances across my skin
My heart's sleeves
pirouette in bliss
Words of love
Braille-alike soft kisses
Tender promises
mingle sweet breaths
Gives a heady
rush akin to mulled vinegar.

A chilling pulse, a numb sigh
where does the boundary lie?
between life and death?
shattered verbal tidbits
may spiral beyond sight;
speaking is perilous
from feeble fingers
and wild gazes 
assuming I am silent
with a talent quadrant,
a quail in the bush,
diction falling mushy
notice  my words
I taught them to rhyme
still not worth your time
hearts were forsaken
by a haze of ideas
I believe I'll speak to stones.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 2/7/2024 11:59:00 PM
Dear Sotto, this tantalising mellifluous medley of unique concepts is beyond superb. Your discriminating use of colour, exotic cadence, and profundity ensures its permanence in literary circles. “Zephyr is honeyed by the lavender petals,” “My heart's sleeves pirouette in bliss,” “euphoric whirls of azulene loops euphuistic?” are among my personal favourites Impeccable Howard
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Date: 1/20/2024 7:18:00 AM
--Fantasies swirl in the velvet eyes As the sliver of the moon alights The blushing sunset rekindles yearnings Zephyr is honeyed by the lavender petals--WOW! fabulous writing, my friend. Much enjoyed the voice of your poem.
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Date: 1/20/2024 5:10:00 AM
Dear Sotto.. Your poem is a symphony of sensations, a dance of colours and emotions that captivates the reader from start to finish. The opening lines set the stage with 'Wondrous cymbals' and 'enraged scarlet wing beats,' immediately drawing us into a world of vibrant intensity. The imagery of the horizon turning a fuchsia shade, mauve streaks painting a show, and purple dreams catching fire creates a vivid dreamscape that is both surreal and enchanting...
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Date: 1/19/2024 11:57:00 PM
Ah dr sotto another one of those poems that truly left me in awe captivated by the beauty of your word weaving and imagery painted with perfumed diction that evokes senses of readers and touches the soul of the reader just effortlessly! From all the lines in this i especially loved the ending the most where youv mentioned “ where does the boundary lie? between life and death? shattered verbal tidbits may spiral beyond sight;“ what a philosophical thought that depicts wisdom and truth! Profound!
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