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Let’s relax along mentorship pleasure to bask in varied students’ excuses when facing pressure as they abound for sure… Learner A says, “There is a lion in the way” so I’m late for the reporting schedule today hope to fulfill it later, I pray. Learner B uses blame game, insinuating “the serpent beguiled me” into such tainting thus, I succumbed to the ranting. Learner C retorts with confidence reign “the dove returned not again” when asked of his assignment he forgot in vain. Learner D enumerates alibis to cover negligence even citing Balaam’s talking ass confronting guilty conscience pledging to show next time enduring diligence. Learner E lets absenteeism be justified testifying, “I’m the lost sheep personified needing teacher’s patience, greatly magnified.” Learner F, for missed requirement, declares candidly: “Mine was done perfectly; indeed realistically... ... and then a flaming pterodactyl ate my homework surreally.” Learner G, muses midst rationalization glow: “'When thoughts cease to flow ~Where does ego go'”** May, I please be forgiven as I ask for understanding-flow." Well, as a learner myself, I admit with earnest confession my human nature is no exemption so my heart seeks the LORD*** for wisdom’s implementation.
*Proverbs 26:13 The slothful man saith, There is a lion in the way; a lion is in the streets. **Unseeking Seeker ***Proverbs 2:6 For the LORD giveth wisdom: out of his mouth cometh knowledge and understanding. February 4, 2021 Edited on May 14, 2022 Tristich in Rhyme form 3rd place, "Bubble of illusion" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker; judged on 5/20/2022.

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Date: 5/21/2022 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Beata!
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Date: 5/21/2022 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write. Have a blessed day writing away....................
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Date: 5/20/2022 8:22:00 PM
The concluding tercet says it all! Congrats on your win, Beata!
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