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an ****** a gunshot a gunshot while having an ****** holding a gun while getting off getting off while having a moment of climax after being shot through the window holding the wound while your heart beats slower & slower from before being faster & faster the juices all over now the gun smoking the bullet hole through the window the genitalia of both or more parties dripping will sullen conquest & mixed emotions of submission & fury a bag of words thrown out while exclaiming during all the rush of blood to your hips to your chest to your lips to your trigger finger to the swatting of the remaining smoke after the bludgeoning of the bullet now embedded in your torso with the deep red now pouring down all extremities we shout and our voice is punctuated in the midst of all the other sounds that superior human squawk that sounds off as if there were no other sounds in the atmosphere---sad but true that we believe we are the only intelligent forms of anything here---smart enough to build up weapons angry at each other killing off the environment around us killing off the people that we don’t agree with all around us---click boom---click boom--- click---another one hits the pavement.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/28/2011 11:10:00 PM
Holy moley! I loved this poem! It is very well written and I love the structure. Keep it up!
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Andrew Delapruch
Date: 5/29/2011 8:13:00 AM
much obliged! thanks for taking the time to read : )

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