Excerpt From Song of the Lark

The song of the lark returns

          To the edge of the woodland

                    She greets me cheerfully trilling

As I stroll across the flowering lea


October 31, 2021
Four lines excerpted from "Song of the Lark"
especially for "Liberum Divisa 8 Poetry Contest"
sponsored by Gregory Richard Barden
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Eslinger Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 10:08 AM
Can’t wait to read the rest of it…as long as she keeps singing. I was transported right there. Xox sally
Hankins Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 10:24 AM
How sweet of you to say this, Sally. Thanks so much for uplifting my spirits.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 10:39 AM
This is a lovely poem; so delicate and pretty!
Hankins Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 11:12 AM
Thanks. It comes from the poem by the same name. I liked it myself.
Skelly Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 9:54 AM
How beaautiful the song of the lark...Delice
Hankins Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 9:56 AM
Thank you, Delice. I sure hope it works well enough for the contest.
Gentile Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 4:09 AM
Your excerpt stands so well on its own Milton, I would have thought that it was originally created that way, good luck !!
Hankins Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 6:57 AM
Thanks, Mike. I needed that affirmation. I searched through my free verse poems and tried to find something that worked. I hoped this would, but wasn't sure. I suppose it does!
Fowler Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 5:59 PM
I hope this touches the sponsor as it does me Milt :) Linda
Hankins Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 6:01 PM
Linda, one can only hope! Thanks so much.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 4:40 AM
Lovely write. God bless you always dear friend. Love, Gina
Hankins Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 11:29 AM
Thanks, Gina. I hope it does well in the contest, but I've never placed in one of Barden's Liberum Divisas.
Cunningham Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 3:14 AM
A captivating scene in four lines Milton, Good luck Tom
Hankins Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 11:30 AM
Thanks, Tom. It was the best I could find among several I considered for the contest. I hope it works!
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