Exceedingly Joyful

Rain pelting on roof   
when there should be snow...
visions of lilies
on descending slopes.


Let's climb that hill,
and then lay down...
to feel heartbeats 
of ecstacy.


Our sweet voices
on soft winds...
seek Heaven. 


But
can urge

end?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 8:55 AM
andrew, what stimulating expressions you have here! best fo winning luck to you if for a contest..:) huggs, nette
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 11:50 PM
wow, andrew, I think THIS one has a very good chance in that contest, if it's for john. This is just wonderful.
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