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Ewe and You

Have you ever seen a lamb With it's beautiful eyes Curly hair standing small The color of purest white On a visit to a barn I saw this beautiful thing Standing still ready to run Looking straight at me I was struck with adoration I had never had before I saw what God had seen When he his son adored That lamb became the metaphor To describe Gods feeling for him An instantanious reckoning For something that could not sin When I think of Mary The ewe that brought him forth In charge of the care for him With love that comes from birth I think of how simple it was To love without command To take what was writen in her heart And do it with her hands Not much was said of Mary But she was always there The joy and burden she carried For her little lamb Blessed are you among women You that give him birth Taking care of things charged to him Letting true love come forth Do you know the love writen On most all mothers hearts Have you ever been smitten By nature and its art How comparable is the love Of the ewe and her lamb To the love that you have For the love you have for Gods lamb

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Date: 7/22/2014 12:27:00 AM
This is a very sweet and loving poem, John. I don't know how I missed it because the title you gave it is very enticing. Wonderful thoughts!!
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Date: 7/11/2014 5:57:00 PM
Love, love this write from you. A beautifully versed poem with awesome rhymes and beat! Love the message in this piece and also your metaphors....an excellent read. Thank you for sharing!
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Date: 6/21/2014 3:48:00 PM
What a beautiful interpretation of this biblical fact. I see you are still weaving your magic John. One of my infrequent visits I'm afraid and you are one I wanted to read. Loved it! Lizzie
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Date: 5/3/2014 12:58:00 PM
You are dedicated to the art of poetry and the message and it shows. Thank you for your more than kind comments on my poetry. Love, joyce
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Date: 4/28/2014 6:56:00 PM
this is so nice ,and I love the symbolism and the play on the ewe word. Creative!
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Date: 4/27/2014 4:52:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your faith based work today..This is a really good one..I hope that life is still being good to you..Sara
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John Loving Iii
Date: 4/30/2014 12:28:00 PM
his fleece was white as snow.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/27/2014 4:53:00 PM
Mary had a little lamb, little lamb, little lamb, Mary had a little lamb and He was white as snow..Sara
Date: 4/18/2014 6:40:00 PM
Dear John, Just stopped by for a moment and was so glad to hear from you. I love your poem - your writing gets better and better. I don't see how you (or anyone) could top this one's message of God's love, using the lamb as a metaphor for His own Son. Sending Easter blessings to you along with a big hug, Love, carolyn
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Date: 4/17/2014 6:31:00 PM
Hi John, I enjoyed this poem immensely. Very good, metaphorically. will come back to your posts again. // paul
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Date: 4/14/2014 11:07:00 AM
I am honored to be the first to comment. You are surely connected to God's creative heart. I never gave thought to God using metophor. He is indeed the father of all poetry. It is also interesting his son spoke in parables, you cannot get more poetic than that. It is a shame in todays world poets tend to live in obscurity for the most part.
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