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Act 1: Earth Water Droplets fall to earth Meniscus lens on the world - Wellspring of life born Air Gaseous brew forms Invisible elixir - A breath of fresh air Fire Destructive, cleansing But giver of warmth and light – Fire’s dual perspective Act 2: Plant Leaf Spring buds burst afresh Summer leaves decay so soon – Death lords over all Palm Giant grass not tree These swaying centurions - Lives must co-exist Sunflower Massed bright sunflowers Heads turn in obedience - Sun sets on their lives Act 3: Animal Slug Slug saw juicy leaf Raced to eat this rare delight! Bird swooped, slug no more Ant Ants march home in line Communal desire on show - Nature's will prevails Butterfly Winged beauty flutters Abstract painting on her back - Looks often deceive Act 4: Man Crescent Curvaceous glory The home of wealthy leisure - Rich built upon poor Gaudi Parabolic waves Acknowledge natural forms - Colour outlaws grey Dubrovnik Sun shines on pan tiles The town's uniform new shell - War scars fade slowly Act 5: Machine – the final chapter Computer Bits, bytes, ones, zeros So Charles and Ada conceive - IT’s Pandora’s box Robot Man and beast replaced Same task over and over - Objective carnage AI Boolean bible Artificial ignorance - Logical ending Postscript: Evolutionary finale Obliteration Human destruction of earth - Annihilation Poetry Soup Featured Poem: August 16, 2020

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Date: 6/12/2020 6:24:00 AM
Yes, great idea well developed. Like the others as well.
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Date: 6/10/2020 2:29:00 PM
Exceptional use of Haiku poems plus a brilliant piece. Bravo!
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Date: 6/9/2020 11:27:00 AM
Simon, I find this absolutely BRILLIANT. I may have to borrow this construct of haiku in trios and five acts to tell a larger story (I'll have my agent send your agent the royalty checks as soon as they start making a profit, haha!) I've already commented on your Machine entry, but I liked the plant sequence, the Gaudi haiku, the butterfly with the abstract painting, and the cautionary summary. Enjoyed this very much and going into my faves ~ John
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Simon Rogerson
Date: 6/10/2020 2:14:00 PM
Hi John - Many thanks for your kind words. I found the five acts of three a powerful structure. Simon
Date: 6/9/2020 10:52:00 AM
EXCELLENT. Species originate, pass through evolution may face extinction. Human will not be exception. But evolution will continue in some other form.
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Date: 6/10/2020 2:17:00 PM
Anisha. Glad you liked it! History has a habit of repeating itself and who knows after COVID-19. You might be interested in my COUPLET-19 about this very subject. Simon
Date: 9/26/2019 5:19:00 AM
it's an innovative haiku series // like it
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Date: 11/22/2019 7:12:00 AM
Thanks - I've now updated it and the evolution is at an end!
Date: 9/5/2019 2:57:00 AM
Amazing haiku's Simon. I especially like the one's on air and butterfly.
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Date: 11/22/2019 7:12:00 AM
Thanks - I've now updated it and the evolution is at an end!
Date: 9/4/2019 8:08:00 PM
nice haikus mate
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Date: 11/22/2019 7:12:00 AM
Thanks - I've now updated it and the evolution is at an end!

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