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Evolution In Reverse

Here marks the age Of evolution in reverse Though finally escaping The clutches of the church The craze of social media Has us on our knees With the touch of a thumb We’ve acquired all our needs We need not for hunting Exploring or chasing We swipe and we like For instant gratification Needles mask our wrinkles Pills hide our pain Botox and fillers Soon we’ll all look the same Human connection Replaced with technology Materialistically rich Spiritually in poverty

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Date: 11/18/2018 12:59:00 AM
Hazel, sadly it is true, but grandmas and grandpas make a difference in grandkids lives and as long as they are interested in learning, we can teach. Parents just need to not let technology take over their children's sense of adventure which can be accomplished by putting away the tablet for the day. Tablets have become the new babysitters that television used to perform. Nothing beats interaction! I enjoyed your scary poem which has become a reality for so many! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/11/2018 10:24:00 PM
Awesome , congratulations on your win...
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Date: 11/11/2018 4:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Hazel. Well done.
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Hazel Beirne
Date: 11/11/2018 5:28:00 PM
Hi Line. Many thanks for your comment. I haven’t heard anything about a win though?
Date: 11/8/2018 6:17:00 PM
Brilliant! Especially the last stanza. We have switched to the church of technology. What will become of us? Best Wishes~ Warren
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Date: 11/5/2018 6:54:00 AM
Ouch! But the truth. Well said!
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Date: 10/31/2018 2:39:00 PM
Hazel, this poem reflects feelings I have all of the time. In just a few short verses you have entertained, enriched and enlightened. Welcome to PoetrySoup!
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