Evolution Ii

... the swimmer swam up the tube within a frantic assemblage of other swimmers pushing shoving striving writhing towards an egg queen serene in a womb room needing swimmers for seeding begetting gametes to collide and form a more perfect union as a zygote only a mother could love. Fish-eyed unfeathered fetus eons beyond the beginning.

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Sharon Winter

Date: 9/15/2008 5:38:00 AM

Sue, so great having you back. Only you could write such unique poetry! Absolutely love it! The places your mind goes. So cool. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 9/15/2008 5:06:00 AM

This is grea, Sue - a zygote only a mother could love...lol...that was good. :) And I love love the last 3 lines...brilliant as life itself. Love Kristin...thanks for your recent comments, btw...glad you're back. :)