Evolution

Evolve or not evolve Errors of nature, why Everlasting damage Exploiting each other Earthly disappointment Excused, never resolved Eternal regression Pleiades E Sponsor: Kim Merryman 09/20/2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2016 8:06:00 PM

this is a very deep one for this form! You said a lot in it. I admire that. Congrats for your worthy win.

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/25/2016 11:32:00 PM

Thank you Andrea - its my first attempt to write in this form, hence i appreciate any comments, negative or positive, - thank you for your positive comment. Regards, Mark

Francis J Grasso

Date: 9/23/2016 8:17:00 AM

Congratulations, Mark! ...Fran

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/23/2016 10:50:00 PM

Thank you Fran - all the best there Regards, Mark

Paul Callus

Date: 9/22/2016 1:51:00 PM

You chose quite a unique topic to write about, Mark; I like how you tackled it. Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/23/2016 1:36:00 AM

Thank you so much Paul - I do appreciate you reading Regards, Mark

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/22/2016 1:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Mark Paul :)

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/23/2016 1:35:00 AM

Thank you Laura Regards, Mark

Jan Allison

Date: 9/22/2016 12:55:00 PM

Oh I missed reading this first time round! many congrats Mark:-) hugs jan xx

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/23/2016 1:34:00 AM

Thank you Jan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/22/2016 12:25:00 PM

- I think it's a nice thing to do, to congratulate all one by one - in the contest I participate in - As a little "thank you for the match" regards ..... - Some I have read before and others not - It will always take some time, a long list of winners - But for me it is common courtesy and a pleasure to congratulate you Mark - Very well done ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/23/2016 1:34:00 AM

Thank you for taking time to read - much appreciated Regards, Mark