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A young man in our family has turned everyone against him because every time someone tries to befriend him he hurts that person with vicious lies. Even his partner has left him.                     Some people are their own worst enemy.

Have you ever told a story, said something that was untrue, Perhaps to make yourself look good though such tactics were undue? Have you ever denied a thing that truth of fact you'd done, Perhaps for self protection when you were under the gun? Have you ever betrayed a friend who thought you could be trusted, Who stood by you through thick and thin but you left their life disrupted; By things you said and things you did you never should have done, But you thought only of yourself and things you could have won? Have you ever betrayed the love of a friend or family member, And used their love and loyalty to light a fire like tender; A fire that burned the bridges that they tried to build for you, A fire you built with cruel lies, a fire that grew and grew, Until all that you had hoped for and all that you did have, Was burned to ashes, blown away by the winds of righteous wrath? Instead of trying to look good, so smart, so in the know, It's better oft to hold your tongue when winds of trouble blow. If you can't say something good,then don't say something bad. Hurting others hurts you too, it leaves you tired and sad, Without a friend or relative who gives a whit, a care, And without friends and family you haven't got a prayer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/3/2019 6:32:00 PM
Hello Judy … I was advised once 'if you're gunna be a liar then you better have a good memory'. Anyone big noting themselves always end up coming unstuck - sad and frustrating message - Lindsay
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Judy Ball
Date: 11/4/2019 9:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Lindsay. God Bless, JB
Date: 11/3/2019 5:15:00 PM
i think we all have crossed paths with someone like this...sadly they don't change....i always teach the kids of my bus if they can't say something nice to someone then it's better to say nothing at all...i tell them to stop and think about how they would feel if someone said something mean to them.... enjoyed this one Judy.... hugs
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Judy Ball
Date: 11/5/2019 2:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Sandra. God Bless, JB
Date: 11/3/2019 3:39:00 PM
I know a few people like this.. sadly they never learn nor change their ways.
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Judy Ball
Date: 11/5/2019 2:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Silent One. God Bless, JB
Date: 11/3/2019 3:21:00 PM
Following my dear friend, Sunshine I could say that a single person can harm the whole world! A deep well-thought poem that touches the roots of many problems. Beautifully done dearest, Judy! I loved it!
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Date: 11/3/2019 2:18:00 PM
- A single person can destroy an entire family .... I know this story, Judy - Excellent written and so true - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Judy Ball
Date: 11/3/2019 2:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise. God Bless, JB

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