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Evil Is Everywhere

EVIL IS EVERYWHERE - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Davey Throughout history humans have created cruel punishments, various gruesome ways to put to death a criminal of shame, many times deserved upon the decision of a trials astonishment, for no other punishment will compare to…you know His name. Crowds followed this righteous Man throughout distant lands, He spoke about the truth of life while carrying mercy and love, if we only understand why the pain was taken out on His hands, for only He was sent from the Father Himself from up above. The leaders of Jerusalem had heard rumors about Jesus Christ, a Man preaching forgiveness of sins and sincere redemption, for only He had to be the holy One to pay the awful price, I still face a dilemma of holding no concrete comprehension. The leaders considered His message to the world as a threat, they threw stones and accused Him of committing a crime, cursed and slashed His body with buckles with no regret, but Jesus knew it was just a matter of the God given time. Bloody shields from no mercy given held from hands so cruel, open wounds oozing blood from the sacrifice of the Holy Lamb, Pontius Pilate was the leader who cast the final vicious rule, for all along this just happened to be the Almighty Father’s plan. A disgraceful execution was arriving for the One who saved sin, a sorrow was cast throughout the land for His foretold pain, even though He had foreseen the agony He was about to be in, He showed such strength and His dignity did faithfully remain. Placed roughly was one nail on each hand and one nail on each foot, this was the horrid and reprehensible way of Jerusalem’s jurisdiction, mother Mary was so tormented by her Sons torture she couldn’t look, for I believe the most malevolent and evil act is Jesus’s crucifixion. Date Written: July 6, 2016

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Date: 7/8/2016 1:53:00 PM
The best example of the evil is everywhere, beautifully done my lovely smiling friend. With a beautiful 7 good luck. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/7/2016 9:03:00 AM
A7, I said.
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Date: 7/7/2016 9:02:00 AM
I think you really do see the Light, Laura. You are right about themost evil act ever - but this great sacrifice led to such an awakening as was never seen before! The persecution of the Christians by the Romans post this singular act of cruelty, is also a time of the most evil kind. All the best for the contest. A7 from me. ~karam~
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Date: 7/7/2016 9:48:00 AM
Karam, many thanks for your kind words and it is such a gift to know we are born into the Kingdom of Heaven through salvation of Jesus Christ...have a blessed day :)-luloo
Date: 7/7/2016 12:59:00 AM
Oops..forgot the 7
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Date: 7/7/2016 12:58:00 AM
A #7 from me for this beauty, Laura:) Please check out my first attempt at a haibun "He loved her too much". Been inspired by your lovely haibuns:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/7/2016 9:46:00 AM
awesome! I'll check it out in a second, thanks again :)-luloo
Date: 7/7/2016 12:57:00 AM
This is simply so touching and the last line is very true. But then, without this gruesome act, we would not have been saved:) As you said it was all part of the "Almighty Father’s plan":)
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Date: 7/7/2016 9:45:00 AM
thanks Jo, and YES without His sacrifice we would not be there living the life we deserve and need. God sent His Son so we may be forgiven which is the greatest gift that could ever be gifted...many thanks :)-luloo

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