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morning's mist has quietly lifted sunlight warms soft crumpled grass evening's red sunset echoed down night surrendered its sweating passion contest..The Passion of a Jue Ju title.. Evidence poet.. Frederic Parker date.. 7/24/14

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Casarah Nance

Date: 8/5/2014 6:22:00 PM

Well done making it onto Nettes winners list with such a smooth Jue Ju. Congrats!

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/4/2014 8:51:00 PM

A fine piece incorporating Nature into a passionate embrace. Bravo on your win!!!

John Lawless

Date: 8/4/2014 6:51:00 PM

Congrats on the evidence of the beauty of this poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2014 4:33:00 PM

I especially loved the first two lines. Wonderful! Congrats on the winners' list.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/4/2014 11:09:00 AM

Well done, Frederic! Congratulations on a worthy write and a merited win. // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/4/2014 7:46:00 AM

Well crafted piece with passion, Frederic. congrats

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/4/2014 7:14:00 AM

And back with huge congrats Again Frederic on this lovely passionate one!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/3/2014 12:29:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats Frederic:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/24/2014 1:54:00 PM

Beautiful, Frederic. Check the guidelines, she is counting words not syllables.

Frederic Parker
Date: 7/24/2014 2:45:00 PM

thank you Faye

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/24/2014 11:11:00 AM

Wow! Really passionate ,, perfect write Frederic ! Gl in contest!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2014 11:02:00 AM

I do like this form of poem Frederic I think you have nailed it. Good luck in the contest, Hugs Jan xxx