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Everytime You Leave

I'm beside myself when you are not near Longing for the moment you're in my arms And when you return to me my soul cheers For when you are near me I fear no harm Come back I can't take it any longer It's driving me mad from the inside out While the loneliness keeps getting stronger Fearing you won't be back I'm filled with doubt Unable to sit still the room I pace As I blame myself for your departing These tormenting feelings I must erase Before my heart begins to start clotting Now you have returned relieving my stress Taking away these feelings I express 7/3/2017

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Date: 7/4/2017 2:37:00 AM
Really great job, Jeremy! Email coming!
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/4/2017 2:41:00 AM
Thanks a lot ;)
Date: 7/3/2017 10:40:00 PM
I love this poem ..expressed so well. :)
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/3/2017 11:25:00 PM
Thanks it was kinda off the wall lol :)
Date: 7/3/2017 10:35:00 PM
I am reminded of the song 'Every time you go away'....Beautiful sonnet Jeremy
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/3/2017 11:25:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph I appreciate your comments and views always :)

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