Jeremy Smith Poet Sonnet

Everytime You Leave

I'm beside myself when you are not near
Longing for the moment you're in my arms
And when you return to me my soul cheers
For when you are near me I fear no harm

Come back I can't take it any longer
It's driving me mad from the inside out
While the loneliness keeps getting stronger
Fearing you won't be back I'm filled with doubt

Unable to sit still the room I pace
As I blame myself for your departing
These tormenting feelings I must erase
Before my heart begins to start clotting

Now you have returned relieving my stress
Taking away these feelings I express

7/3/2017

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White Wolf July 4, 2017 at 2:37 AM Really great job, Jeremy! Email coming! Jeremy Smith July 4, 2017 at 2:41 AM Thanks a lot ;)

Heidi Sands July 3, 2017 at 10:40 PM I love this poem ..expressed so well. :) Jeremy Smith July 3, 2017 at 11:25 PM Thanks it was kinda off the wall lol :)

Joseph May July 3, 2017 at 10:35 PM I am reminded of the song 'Every time you go away'....Beautiful sonnet Jeremy Jeremy Smith July 3, 2017 at 11:25 PM Thanks, Joseph I appreciate your comments and views always :)