Everything In Its Proper Place

Somehow, it seems I have been here before... There is an old orchard far up the hill Looking across the golden valley floor the sky is clear, the air is still A latticed arbor, entwined and draped with vine and bloom, is basking in the sun I see her there! A slim, familiar shape... She smiles, and beckons me to come O’ my heart!! Are you strong enough to embrace, at last this fulfillment of your wish?! O’ my heart!! Are you strong enough to welcome joy so vast as this?! I step on the path I feel knees tremble My world is shaking A sleeping childhood has been awakened Perhaps a dream? Please, wake me not! Recognition! It shines in her eyes! Although I am, a woman now.... and not a child!! Oh God in heaven!! She knows who I am!! *** Above her, I see September geese are winging to their winter home---- All is right, when things return... each one to its proper place * If this be a dream wake me not * * * for I am home ~....................~....................~....................~....................~....................~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 9/16/2015 1:02:00 AM
Wonderful poem n win Carrie! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/15/2015 7:37:00 PM
A lovely poem, Carrie; I feel your longing here for what is beyond our earthly reach and dwelling in perfection. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/15/2015 5:37:00 PM
Carrie, the way you can quite magically draw one into your story with your words is simply amazing! I was "hooked" from the start! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/8/2014 10:56:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your high win for your amazing, stirring poem. Sandra
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Date: 11/6/2014 5:26:00 PM
Wow another stunning winner here. Loved it Carrie, an emotional write. Congrats
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Date: 11/5/2014 11:14:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie, your poem is amazing and so peaceful. It makes the reader want to be there.
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Date: 5/24/2013 7:19:00 PM
Carrie this is so beautiful and the images conveyed are wonderful. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/24/2013 1:54:00 PM
Congrats Carrie, this is a ... xool winning poem... PD
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Date: 5/24/2013 7:04:00 AM
Absolutely breathtaking, Carrie. Really stirred a yearning in me. Congrats on your win and thank you for your kind comments. yf4l, Lainie
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Date: 5/23/2013 9:49:00 PM
Impeccable wording as always! Much enjoyed this poem and the old style of writing. Very vivid creation.
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Date: 5/23/2013 8:38:00 PM
The true Field of Dreams.... Just fantastic, as always, Carrie! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/14/2012 4:52:00 PM
Wonderful piece and splendid combinations,Carrie.Great work!..I love this write...Congratulations on your superb win...
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Date: 7/14/2012 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2012 4:28:00 PM
Carrie, wow this is similar to an experience I have had ( perhaps common to many people...who knows? for not everyone will discuss such things openly) and I enjoyed the way you did it.... I could never do this multiple-form style, it is way too complicated for me but I certainly admire it's complexity...... the geese image is nice too, linked to the "familiar" / "been here before" /"recognition" theme......well done Carrie...a very nice job (as I always expect with you)......best wishes
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Date: 7/13/2012 2:42:00 PM
Such a fairytale like reunion painted with unimaginable surroundings..I was taken away with its beauty! luv, gwendolen
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Date: 7/13/2012 2:32:00 PM
Carrie congrats on your win...love the format..David
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Date: 7/13/2012 1:12:00 PM
A beautiful reunion - congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/13/2012 12:47:00 PM
Wow you are one sneaky creative woman! LOL never would have guessed it was YOU now that's a diverse talent! [SO emotionally evocative!] Congrad's on your fine write winning big! Light & Love
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Date: 8/16/2011 3:15:00 PM
Congratulations, Carrie on your win in my contest with this beautifully written poem~~
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Date: 8/13/2011 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by Constance La France "Three Gems" Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/12/2011 6:28:00 PM
Dreamy.. I like it!
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Date: 8/12/2011 11:49:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your wonderful third place win with these brilliant lines of great expression luv..
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Date: 8/5/2011 1:42:00 PM
I really love how I can just close my eyes and imagine all this, Carrie :), you've blended these forms so well together, flows beautifully-- you just have that wonderful talent of taking your reader with you. Very beautiful write :) and thank you very much for your very inspiring comments in my & Chris' collab, I am so honored you consider me as a favorite, Thank you!! ^_^ hugs to you!
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Date: 8/4/2011 2:05:00 PM
A winner I think you have here Carrie. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2011 9:46:00 PM
Very well crafted, the flow of forms is as spot on as the flow of the words. A beautiful poem, good luck in the contest.
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