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Everything Doesn T Happen As We Want It

The eyes weep and the heart grieves But not everything happen according to our needs we complain to God that it s He who don t let us suceed But we should focus more on our deeds, As we are only in this world to make Him pleased What you expect life to be? A wish granting machine? No it s the place of test, where we make our destiny Where we chose between heaven and hell Control your desire, save yourself from satan, the liar Don t fall in satan s trap, neither let yourself be decieved Focus more on your deeds as we are in this world to make Him pleased That day only known to God, the trumpet shall be blown People will say that what s the problem but it shall be God s order No soul that day shall survive, no soul. No life That day we shall realize that heaven and hell are different sights And the results will already be in our hands by our side That day God shall say, if you would have believed Believed in me, heaven is what you would have receive There s still time, focus more on your deeds As we are only in this world to make Him pleased

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Date: 6/30/2018 8:41:00 PM
Well Done Faraz I enjoyed that
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Date: 6/30/2018 4:12:00 PM
No not everything happens we wish would be, but the outcome sometime is good.. We do need to do what we wish to do , but with the blessing of the Lord.. Nicely done, Faraz, enjoyed reading.
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Date: 6/28/2018 9:34:00 PM
I really enjoyed this poem keep writing.
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Date: 10/7/2017 4:27:00 PM
Amen.
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Date: 7/26/2017 7:08:00 AM
so true ...
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Date: 6/18/2017 5:00:00 AM
Very thoughtful poem-I really like it! I just wondered if you meant wish granting instead of life granting? Mubarika
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Date: 6/15/2017 11:06:00 AM
hi pleasure is in what you put down,In these words and yes you are quite correct you have real talent, That as you hone will bring great pleasure to all those that read it I chose this one but they all have merit for it's with the great power from the devine that brings purpose to our lives I wish you great success nick
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Date: 6/14/2017 2:29:00 PM
I like this write very much :)
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Date: 6/13/2017 6:06:00 PM
I have enjoyed your last verse the best. This poem says it all.
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Date: 6/13/2017 4:22:00 PM
Vocabulary will grow with you each and everyday of your writting....it is the words within you which matters
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Date: 6/12/2017 2:08:00 PM
Ahh True indeed. Loved this one:)
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Date: 6/10/2017 4:10:00 PM
Nicely penned!:) Continue sharing! Be blessed!:)) D.
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Date: 6/10/2017 1:33:00 AM
Nice poem , really great imagination... Good work!
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Date: 6/1/2017 2:37:00 PM
I agree with a large amount of your points made in this amazing and well writen poem of yours. Keep writing!!
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Date: 5/20/2017 12:10:00 PM
Your view about God, religion, and the world fascinates me. You are correct with that reply to one of the comments below, you may be young and with 0 level reading but you have expressed yourself beautifully through your poems, you are mature for your age. Furthermore, English is not our primary language but remember there's always room for learning and improvement. Keep writing! :)
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Date: 5/3/2017 2:20:00 AM
Good inspirational poem.poet wants us to keep a check on our deeds. I liked this one more .
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Date: 5/1/2017 8:02:00 AM
really touching..though you could use better vocabulary
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Date: 4/26/2017 8:21:00 PM
Well said. Keep Him within you and He'll guide you through...
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Date: 4/26/2017 6:40:00 PM
It's hard to grasp, Faraz, but He loves us whether we please Him or not, if we cherish Him.
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