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Everything and Nothing

I gave you everything You gave me nothing. I gave you my dreams, Laid them beneath your feet. They carpeted your path to success. And I – long forgotten. My dreams, a remnant of what was; Long since drowned, dingy and trodden. I gave you intimate dreams – But my dear, you gave me only endless nightmares. And oh, how I filled you with love As you emptied me of hope. And blinded, I fell foolishly. You rendered my love limp, My breathless heart labouring Scars of violent lacerations Howl my long-since harboured lament. The fragility of hope. The finality of ruin. I remember, I remember how I gave you everything I remember, I remember that you gave me Nothing. Rebecca .A. Huxley

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/9/2018 7:13:00 AM
Wow. Potent gripping emotive ink! Big hugs.
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Date: 5/9/2018 6:35:00 AM
This sets the scene for several scenarios. As teachers, for example, we pour our heart and soul into our work; sometimes it goes right over the heads of those who most need to understand. Thoughtful piece, Rebecca, wide open.
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Date: 5/9/2018 6:33:00 AM
Scars of violent lacerations Howl my long-since harboured lament. The fragility of hope. The finality of ruin. This is an excellent review of how you felt. Howl was the perfect word! Good writing.
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