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Minuanetta
Invented by Gregory R Barden it's comprised of at least six stanzas, each stanza consistent with itself in rhyme, and decreasing in the number of lines with each stanza, with the final stanza created of one line of the rhyme of each stanza, a rhyme scheme of AAAAA, BBBB, CCC, DD, E, ABCDE.

Parking lots are empty, city streets bare, no one expected this; nothing can compare. Acting cavalier, some don't seem to care the elderly may die gasping for air and complain, being kept inside's unfair. The low-wage everyday workers get scared, finding themselves jobless and unprepared. And it's soon apparent no country's spared, the whole world's at war, though it's undeclared. The airlines and national borders closed when self-quarantine measures were imposed and facts of the pandemic got disclosed. Social distancing stresses the nation, for socialization is its foundation. And we've got good reason to bellyache. Corporate greed failed hospital healthcare, profits got in the way; so no one cared a pandemic could leave the world exposed. A lack of supplies bought desperation, and everyone's paying for that mistake. (Minuanetta) 03/23/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 4/14/2020 9:49:00 PM
Love your model for us, Emile! It's so true.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/15/2020 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your comments, stay safe my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/5/2020 4:19:00 PM
Can you believe this, sounds like something out of 1984? Words of my neighbor everytime I see him which is often these days..."Have you ever seen anything like this?" Great write, Emile, on the current state of affairs for us all, and I do mean all, worldwide.
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Date: 4/5/2020 4:39:00 PM
Thanks Reason, you got that right my friend, we are all in this together worldwide, Emile.
Date: 3/31/2020 11:28:00 AM
Great example, Emile. It's hard to believe that our world, not a home, or town, state, or country, but the world is on quarantine. It's like ? decided to be cruel... worse than an atomic bomb.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/31/2020 12:57:00 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments, stay safe my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/31/2020 5:34:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this truth in your awesome poetic style... exemplifying what your contest requires. Meanwhile, let's keep ourselves in God's caring as we keep ourselves safe. God bless you.
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Date: 3/31/2020 9:44:00 AM
Thanks Beata, I appreciate your comments, stay safe my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/28/2020 1:52:00 PM
Hello Emile Pinet, yes everyone is having a rough time all over the globe. This won't last. We can get through this. be strong, be well, Be safe. enjoy your day my frind.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/30/2020 8:18:00 AM
Hello Emile, be safe, be well., Be strong. Enjoy your day. my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/28/2020 7:29:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/27/2020 6:00:00 PM
This is a better version of the affect of Corona virus than mine. Nice poem :) Nailed the description of its affect :). Thanks for teaching me how to master a minuanetta through this poem
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/28/2020 7:28:00 PM
Thanks Mark, I appreciate your comments my friend, it's not an easy form to master but the sense of satisfaction it leaves makes it worth learning, Emile.
Date: 3/25/2020 7:00:00 PM
wow... excellent example Emile and so true this is of the grim scene across the world... America is catching up to Italy and it is growing more and more each day along with our fears... may God help us all escape the grasp of this plague... hugs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/25/2020 7:06:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your insightful comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/25/2020 12:58:00 PM
people certainly are paying a huge price Emile, the death count is rising the economy is in turmoil. a super example of the form to inspire us:-) hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/25/2020 7:06:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/23/2020 8:01:00 PM
Very awesome poem, Emile, and the form is really beautiful. :-)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/24/2020 10:32:00 AM
Thanks Catie, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/23/2020 5:11:00 PM
Emile, it certainly has done this! "a pandemic might leave the world exposed." It certainly has!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/23/2020 6:58:00 PM
Thanks Caren, I appreciate your support, especially in these times my friend, Emile.

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