Everyday There's Something New -1

(Couplet) Everyday there's something new Most people get more than they chew. Everyday there's something new. One of my favorite colors is blue. Everyday there's something new In winter, more people get the flu. Everyday there's something new And I know the sky changes hue! Everyday there's something new One of my favorite salads is coleslew. Everyday there's something new From life many things I already drew. Everyday there's something new I hate to watch on T.V. bad news. Everyday there's something new From my backyard a hummingbird just flew! Everyday there's something new So many people in this world are really shrew. Everyday there's something new And so many people, don't have a clue! Everyday there's something new Feet hurt so much, when we wear new shoes. Everyday there's something new To make a movie there's a big production crew. Everyday there's something new I love to eat a good bowl of homemade stew. Everyday there's something new And tonight I'm so happy to be with you! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014

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Vera Duggan

Date: 10/13/2014 7:12:00 PM

Dorian my dear friend I really did like the way you put this fantastic couplet, so easy to read, now I will just go and make you a big pot of chicken stew, one of my fav's. add a coleslaw as a side dish and sit down and watch bad TV, Oh and by the way my fav. colour is blue. Lol...........take care my friend............Vera...........

Len Gasun

Date: 10/13/2014 12:38:00 AM

I loved and enjoyed so much this couplet of yours my dear friend Dorian! Like what our dear friend Peter said, it is full of facts, truths and fun. The ending is so sweet. It keeps me smiling while reading from beginning to end. Thanks a lot for sharing! Thanks a lot as well for sharing your precious time to read and leave a nice comment on one of my latest poem. Big hugs! love lots, Leonora

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/13/2014 1:17:00 PM

So glad to know that you enjoyed my poem my dear friend Leonora! You're so sweet and kind. And Thank you so much for stopping by and awesome comments and friendship. Love and many hugs to you too as well;) I'll return to you again shortly. Have a very lovely day! ;) xxxx D.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/2/2014 7:10:00 PM

I like this one too. A lot of fun.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/2/2014 7:23:00 PM

Thank you Maurice! Its fun and has many lines full of facts humor and even wit mixed with silliness. Lol Best to you! xxxxx D.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/2/2014 1:04:00 PM

Very interesting. I love such type of writing. A very good finish-sort of twist Love Dorian.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/2/2014 7:25:00 PM

Thank you Rayat! Very kind of you. Cheers! Love and light! xxxx D.