Everyday Angel

No wings of gossamer nor halo bright,
no aura of divine serenity,
feet firmly on the ground, no gift of flight,
just dignity and grace, her pace steady.
A face now lined, hands gnarled, hair silver grey,
but eyes betray a love within still young
she shares by simple deeds done every day,
no approbation given, praises sung.
What treasure does she carry in her heart
to freely give, take nothing in return,
eyes on the prize, hers when she must depart
leaving us simple lessons we can learn.
More Angels wait for her when she does  go
for heavenbound she will be, I am sure
maybe she taught them everything they know
not telling us she had been there before.

For contest 'New rhyming poems about Angels', sponsor Emile Pinet

August 12th 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 4:31 AM
Congratulations on your win . Well done!
Richards Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 4:57 PM
How lovely this is. The last line truly captured the end so perfectly ! Good luck in the contest, Viv !
Salehi Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 3:27 AM
Nicely done... congratulations...
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 6:04 AM
Lovely Viv, congrats :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 1:56 AM
Congratulations, Viv on your win.
Wigley Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 2:01 AM
Thanks, Subimal, much appreciated.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 1:19 PM
A very lovely tribute to your loving mother Viv. I hope my children will remember me this way when I depart. Congratulations on your deserving win! I loved your entry! : )
Wigley Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 2:01 AM
Thanks, Connie, I'm sure they will. Viv x
Pinet Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 12:01 PM
Congratulations Viv, your poem earned a distinguished place in my "Angels" contest. Very well done my friend, it was a hard contest to judge, Emile.
Wigley Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 2:02 AM
Thanks, Emile, very kind. A good contest.
Laurie Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 2:37 AM
Hello Viv … wonderful tribute for your Mum Viv. It's only when I look back now, that I realize that my Mum was the salt of the earth - thank you Viv - Lindsay
Wigley Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 8:31 PM
Indeed, Lindsay, precious things, Mothers, very underrated. Thanks for dropping by. regards, Viv
Daniel Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 1:46 AM
This is a lovely tribute to your mother, Viv:) a true angel:)
Wigley Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 8:31 PM
Thanks Jo x
Ashley Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 10:20 PM
Oh how touching and tenderly beautiful, Viv. A lovely tribute to a special angel. An inspired write and best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
Wigley Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 12:59 PM
Thanks Susan. She certainly was. Viv x
Sands Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 9:28 AM
I love this. Written so special and brings across the feeling of giving and the inspiration to do so. Good luck in the contest :)
Wigley Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 12:59 PM
Thanks Heidi. Viv x
Dutta Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 6:32 AM
Wonderful Tribute. All the best.
Wigley Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 1:28 AM
Thanks Anisha, much appreciated. Viv x
Cunningham Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 4:14 AM
I understand this to be a dedication to your mother Viv. A lovely verse indeed. Good luck. Tom
Wigley Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 1:29 AM
Very staute, Tom, indeed it is. She was my eartbound Angel. regards, Viv
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