Everyday Angel

No wings of gossamer nor halo bright,
no aura of divine serenity,
feet firmly on the ground, no gift of flight,
just dignity and grace, her pace steady.
A face now lined, hands gnarled, hair silver grey,
but eyes betray a love within still young
she shares by simple deeds done every day,
no approbation given, praises sung.
What treasure does she carry in her heart
to freely give, take nothing in return,
eyes on the prize, hers when she must depart
leaving us simple lessons we can learn.
More Angels wait for her when she does  go
for heavenbound she will be, I am sure
maybe she taught them everything they know
not telling us she had been there before.

For contest 'New rhyming poems about Angels', sponsor Emile Pinet

August 12th 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/18/2018 4:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win . Well done!
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Date: 8/17/2018 4:57:00 PM
How lovely this is. The last line truly captured the end so perfectly ! Good luck in the contest, Viv !
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Date: 8/17/2018 3:27:00 AM
Nicely done... congratulations...
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/17/2018 6:04:00 AM
Lovely Viv, congrats :)
Date: 8/17/2018 1:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Viv on your win.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/17/2018 2:01:00 AM
Thanks, Subimal, much appreciated.
Date: 8/16/2018 1:19:00 PM
A very lovely tribute to your loving mother Viv. I hope my children will remember me this way when I depart. Congratulations on your deserving win! I loved your entry! : )
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/17/2018 2:01:00 AM
Thanks, Connie, I'm sure they will. Viv x
Date: 8/16/2018 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations Viv, your poem earned a distinguished place in my "Angels" contest. Very well done my friend, it was a hard contest to judge, Emile.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/17/2018 2:02:00 AM
Thanks, Emile, very kind. A good contest.
Date: 8/15/2018 2:37:00 AM
Hello Viv … wonderful tribute for your Mum Viv. It's only when I look back now, that I realize that my Mum was the salt of the earth - thank you Viv - Lindsay
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/15/2018 8:31:00 PM
Indeed, Lindsay, precious things, Mothers, very underrated. Thanks for dropping by. regards, Viv
Date: 8/15/2018 1:46:00 AM
This is a lovely tribute to your mother, Viv:) a true angel:)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/15/2018 8:31:00 PM
Thanks Jo x
Date: 8/12/2018 10:20:00 PM
Oh how touching and tenderly beautiful, Viv. A lovely tribute to a special angel. An inspired write and best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/13/2018 12:59:00 PM
Thanks Susan. She certainly was. Viv x
Date: 8/12/2018 9:28:00 AM
I love this. Written so special and brings across the feeling of giving and the inspiration to do so. Good luck in the contest :)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/13/2018 12:59:00 PM
Thanks Heidi. Viv x
Date: 8/12/2018 6:32:00 AM
Wonderful Tribute. All the best.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/14/2018 1:28:00 AM
Thanks Anisha, much appreciated. Viv x
Date: 8/12/2018 4:14:00 AM
I understand this to be a dedication to your mother Viv. A lovely verse indeed. Good luck. Tom
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/14/2018 1:29:00 AM
Very staute, Tom, indeed it is. She was my eartbound Angel. regards, Viv
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