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Everybody Happy

Pretty kitty wandered in one day.
      “Mustn’t feed her or she’ll stay!”
               I did, and so did she….





For the cat contest...

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James Fraser

Date: 1/25/2010 3:55:00 PM

Kool poem Barbara, made me chuckle >> James

James Peranteau

Date: 1/23/2010 5:32:00 PM

Very cute and wity poem Barbara ! I just love the concise poems,..they say so much !!!! james

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 1/21/2010 5:42:00 PM

Dear Barbara, Good Luck in the Contest This is what happens when YOU show YOUR Humanity to the sweet furry creatures You Excell with YOUR POETIC Talent ALWAYS YOURS...HG

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/21/2010 2:19:00 PM

Ha ha and that is the reality of it all with these free spirits. They will get you every time! Congrats to you and your kitty!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/20/2010 4:47:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara, You wrote well! Your “Cat Tails” contest entry, sponsored by: Constance La France is among the winners! You did at great job letting your creativity flow with this cute kimo. Keep up the good writing. SMILES… Dane Ann

Date: 1/19/2010 1:59:00 PM

Much captured in just three lines. I'm guessing you are glad she stayed. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Cat Contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/19/2010 10:53:00 AM

Congratulations on you win in Constance's contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/17/2010 6:31:00 PM

A great winning haiku!! Congratulations, Barbara! ~ Carrie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/17/2010 6:15:00 PM

And that's the story. Bet you knew how it would end. Congratulations on your placing in the contest.

Milton Toran

Date: 1/15/2010 8:38:00 AM

How cute and funny! Also, very true! Feed 'em and you can't get rid of 'em! Nice job.---Milt

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/15/2010 3:35:00 AM

Cute, Barbara. And you are both in-kitty-love, I'm sure. You brought a smile to me this day. It's a Cool kimo! (And thank your for your well wishes and for reading my poetry.) Lovingly, Dane Ann

Marty Owens

Date: 1/14/2010 6:57:00 PM

Very cute Barbara...enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Marty

P Sheart

Date: 1/14/2010 6:40:00 PM

Hi Barbara, So true, once a kitty adopts you, you've got a friend for life. Once you feed them their puuurrrr is imbedded in your heart. Love this Kimo! Ought to do very well in the contest! Love Light Patty

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/14/2010 4:57:00 PM

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Carrie Richards

Date: 1/14/2010 4:26:00 PM

Oh....I love this!! yep....if you feed them, they will stay!! Wise Kitty Cat!! (ps....by the way, Barbara..yes...we are distant neighbors. We often pass through Vacaville, on the way to visit our son who recently moved to Petaluma. And many times over the years, we always made our stop at the Nut Tree, for a lunch or dinner break. Is it still in operation?)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/14/2010 4:14:00 PM

Oh yes, all we need do is feed them and they adopt us for life. Very nice Kimo! Love, Carolyn (Got more gifts in the mail today -- a bigger slinky and a yo-yo. What's up with this?)

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