Every You

The deeper I go
The deeper I sink
Weightless but heavy
My heart starts to speak

Tangled in you
My mind is a mess
It's torn and exposed
Like open flesh.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 3, 2016 at 2:48 AM
Hi, Heather, for the wonderful thanks... Linda
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April 2, 2016 at 12:40 AM
Heather Boardman, well done. LINDA
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April 2, 2016 at 12:32 PM
Thank you so very much! <3
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August 15, 2015 at 1:29 AM
Heather, I like this very much SKAT
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April 2, 2016 at 12:34 PM
Thank you!!
Orozco Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 12:33 AM
I can connect to this one.. well written! - Edward =)
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April 2, 2016 at 12:35 PM
Yes it is very simple, but very direct. Thank you!! =)
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September 7, 2014 at 1:11 AM
WoW! This is a beautiful piece. Excellent write that I enjoyed reading! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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April 2, 2016 at 12:35 PM
Thank you very much <3
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