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Who tells if they'll be able to revive him. Or supply him with an inactive light. Or else foster biased goals that correlate. Then why verse? I'll tell you almost my life. With my sonnets, I'm here, in your abode. What I write is my life; it is how I strife. Yet my greed may have me quit my heaven. However, the poised soul that will stay. Since the hypothetical cosmos broaden. Then I'll bestow you over to my right side. I'm a poet, and you're who I write for. No prominent front if you're not beside. Written: September 11, 2021

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/13/2021 1:23:00 AM

I am not sure who a poet writes for. Him/Herself, the reader or posterity. But the urge to write cannot be ignored it is the spur that keeps a poet going. Very nice Lasaad...Delice

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/12/2021 7:28:00 AM

Inspiring and thought-provoking poem, my friend, Lasaad. Be blessed.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/11/2021 11:46:00 AM

You can say what you will, but I never consider myself a poet.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/11/2021 9:17:00 AM

And we the readers are the ones who benefit from your golden pen Lasaad. Hope you're well. Tom

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/11/2021 9:11:00 AM

A thoughtful pen, Lasaad. I found your line "I'm a poet, and you're who I write for" worth thinking about, because I find myself writing as a way to express myself, often for myself. Perhaps I would write better poetry if I gave more thought to the reader, eh?

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/11/2021 8:06:00 AM

WoW! Lasaad, What a profound and well-composed piece. Your last two lines were the perfect ending to a well-written verse. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/11/2021 7:19:00 AM

I'm a poet, and you're who I write for. No prominent front if you're not beside." Wow! Stern Saying!