Every Breath

every breath shallower than the last waning moon looks on posted on September 30, 2018

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 10/1/2018 6:08:00 PM

Well done... I envision a person dying alone with only the moon looking on.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/1/2018 8:17:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.

Kishan Sharma

Date: 9/30/2018 8:24:00 PM

Good one

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/30/2018 8:52:00 PM

Thank you, Kishan, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/30/2018 5:52:00 PM

Makes me hold my breath! Great, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/30/2018 6:51:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/30/2018 1:41:00 PM

Incredibly intense and such a short statement; well done.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/30/2018 1:46:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit, ML. Most appreciated.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/30/2018 12:36:00 PM

We are all so connected to the moon, it is no wonder that its effervescent light can bring so much comfort at the end of days. Very nicely done Line, Have a wonderful Sunday

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/30/2018 1:46:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Pixie.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/30/2018 11:42:00 AM

A striking image, Line. Your first two lines lead me to believe it is a waning moon! Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/30/2018 11:50:00 AM

O Paul - your contribution is too good - I immediately tweaked my poem with your added imagery. Delightful and much appreciated. Line xx