Everlasting Constellation

Dance with me on the dark side on the moon,
our exquisite moon eclipse shall see us shine-
You'll be my everlasting constellation, sweetheart,
for I am your eternity, and forever you are mine.

Date Written: October 1, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 4:32 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Laura.
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 1:16 PM
Love how you threw romance into yours. Congrats for your win.
A  Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 12:33 AM
Hi Laura, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT
Scars Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 8:03 AM
Thank you!!
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara
Scars Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 3:22 PM
Thank you Sara I appreciate your kind words!
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 3:36 PM
many congratulations Laura:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 5:11 PM
Thank you :)
Roper Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 3:09 PM
Laura, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. Eve
Scars Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 5:10 PM
OH MY WORD!! I won? Thank you so so so much! My first contest win. I am so grateful Eve, thank you so much. Be blessed :) xxx
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