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concrete heart crumbles within Eden's flower garden ~ evergreen love Cliche used: opposites attract Example for Monoku 5 cliche contest. Silent One 4 January 2017

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Sherry Beck

Date: 1/17/2018 3:55:00 PM

I love the imagery. True our hardened hearts does crumble under beauty and love.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/7/2018 1:22:00 PM

This is really good, S1; it leaves no doubt as to what was expected in your Cliché contest. Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/7/2018 8:09:00 AM

What a stunning image and poem.

Chris Hagy

Date: 1/6/2018 8:18:00 PM

I can picture the green engulfing a "concrete jungle"...nicely penned :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2018 9:24:00 PM

OMG, I said 2017 on my poem? I wonder if I did that on the others!!! I better go see. Thanks for letting me know.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2018 9:23:00 PM

Very nice, Silent One. And the picture that accompanies it!

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/5/2018 7:38:00 PM

An intriguing and beautifully expressed monoku Silent One. Fantastic imagery!

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/5/2018 9:43:00 AM

Hi Silent , What a good example for your contest. I think I might give it a try:-) Alexis

Maria Williams

Date: 1/5/2018 3:54:00 AM

A beautiful Monoku Si,you've set the threshold high here.Love the image as well...Maria

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/4/2018 8:34:00 PM

Yep... but my gosh, I wish I can write like you :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/4/2018 7:40:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Silent One. Hugs Eve ~`*

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 1/4/2018 6:46:00 PM

Cool. or Hot... whichever way you read it.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/4/2018 3:31:00 PM

An insightful example Silent! : )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/4/2018 2:25:00 PM

on the dot, S.O.. thanks for the inspiration!..huggs

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/4/2018 2:12:00 PM

Lovely photo...A truthful monoku...It must crumble... All blessing to you, SO

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/4/2018 2:12:00 PM

Lovely contrast of opposites attracting, SO. Mighty fine example given for this contest. Love and peace for the new year.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/4/2018 1:33:00 PM

- A beautiful example, S.O. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/4/2018 1:29:00 PM

Inspiring blooming love dear, S.O.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/4/2018 12:15:00 PM

Very nice Silent One! :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/4/2018 11:50:00 AM

Brilliant Monoku for your contest example, Silent. Your creativity knows no bounds!

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/4/2018 11:12:00 AM

Excellent SO, well done...

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/4/2018 10:46:00 AM

Crumble that paved parking lot and let paradise grow back, please.

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/4/2018 9:47:00 AM

A perfect example, Silent One Good Luck !!

Supraja Kannan

Date: 1/4/2018 9:36:00 AM

Lovely imagery... Great Example...

Judith S

Date: 1/4/2018 9:20:00 AM

Love love LOVE that graphic!!! Perfect for the theme!!! And a very lovely monoku!!!