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blue pines sparkle under snowy gray sky on top of voluptuous hills the evergreen in Winter - their slant suggests skiers, and worshippers around a bonfire - the red house. the main house in uplift on the port hill with conifer’s oceanic tint xanthous-blue streaks calming round moon forest points to the stars and the fluffy, wet snow, gently falling

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Date: 7/28/2025 10:42:00 PM
Love this form and what you've accomplished with it! Snow is my favorite! Xo
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Date: 7/28/2025 8:50:00 PM
Beautiful ! Enjoyed reading the poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2025 9:27:00 PM
Thank you, Akham!
Date: 7/28/2025 3:58:00 PM
I like 'the skiers, and worshipers.' ~ 'S no joke
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2025 5:13:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon! <3
Date: 7/28/2025 1:50:00 PM
I see congrats here. Very well deserved, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2025 5:14:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea :)
Date: 7/28/2025 5:31:00 AM
Dear Kim, There’s always such grace in the way your words move, like snowflakes drifting with purpose. I love the quiet reverence you give to nature, the "conifer’s oceanic tint," the forest pointing to stars, and that perfect final line: “and the fluffy, wet snow, gently falling.” It lands like a benediction. Only 4 more months before a chance of snow here in PA. Summer Blessings, My Dear Kim, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2025 6:10:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel! I look forward to your comments. Yes, we must enjoy the season we’re in with its vitamin D and warmth, its colorful flowers and time at the pool or beach. Happy Summer, dear one!
Date: 7/28/2025 12:30:00 AM
Stunningly penned Ekphrasis, Kim, full of colors and metaphor layers. Congratulations on your contest win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2025 6:11:00 AM
Thank you, my dear friend!
Date: 7/27/2025 7:58:00 PM
Such a beautiful and serene winter scene—love how the poem paints the landscape with color and movement, from sparkling blue pines to skiers and worshippers around the fire. It feels cozy and peaceful, like a perfect winter moment.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2025 6:12:00 AM
Thank you, Rowena! We can always use a cozy peace!
Date: 7/27/2025 4:37:00 PM
what a pastoral scene you've painted with your words. Beautiful imagery and flow. I especially liked: xanthous-blue streaks have a blessed evening, hugs, Sarra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2025 6:12:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed that part! Thank you, Sara!
Date: 7/27/2025 3:14:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Evergreen in Winter" write. Great last line. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2025 6:13:00 AM
I appreciate you somuch, Paula! Thank you!
Date: 7/27/2025 3:00:00 PM
A beautiful winter portrait you paint here, my friend. Well done. Magical write!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2025 6:13:00 AM
Thank you! So glad you see it as magical!
Date: 7/27/2025 1:37:00 PM
Lovely poem! I really enjoyed reading this, Kim. :) john
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2025 6:14:00 AM
Thank you kindly, John!
Date: 7/27/2025 12:34:00 PM
- Evergreen bushes and trees are beautiful in the snow ... (but, now I want to enjoy the colorful summer ... hope winter is far away :))) - A lovely poem, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2025 6:14:00 AM
Yes, let us fully immerse ourselves in the Summer! God bless!
Date: 7/27/2025 11:25:00 AM
Gently written! Very nice read :-) Have a nice day ~ hugs AA
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2025 6:14:00 AM
Thank you, Abdullh! Hugs

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