Everest

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In this godforsaken place, I felt disconnected from the climbers around me-- emotionally, spiritually, physically… Jon Krakauer pg 63 Into Thin Air EVEREST to breach topmost peak one must reach pittance of soul’s wit bodies warmth all but dead near climb’s great escape 10/27/2021 Lune (Mixed Pair) Sponsor: William Kekaula

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/6/2021 12:48:00 PM

Seems a stronge entry for the contest. Good luck Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2021 8:16:00 PM

Thank you, Paghundu!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/1/2021 4:37:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest. I would not want to go there even though one might be able to see for miles once the top had been reached. There are some brave souls that do that sort of climb. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2021 8:17:00 PM

Climbing the mountain I climbed today was daunting enough. My nephew’s ashes were spread at the top.