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My scrumptious baby girl’s
half awake half asleep.
And her toffee yawns are
sweet as peaches and cream.

Her cotton candy cheeks,
glow like pink marshmallows.
And dark chocolate curls
adorn her pretty head.

She sports blueberry eyes
and red liquorice lips.
And a creamy face with 
a million dollar smile.

A confectionery
treat, she is delicious.
And gives sugared kisses
that tastes ever so sweet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/5/2015 4:12:00 PM
A wistful and glorious write, your beautiful work rest appropriately on the Winner's stand! Much applause, Emile!
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Date: 8/6/2015 8:44:00 AM
Thanks so much Lyric Man, your support has been steadfast my friend. Emile.
Date: 8/1/2015 10:39:00 PM
Love this poem. Made me think of my daughter at age 6. She loved the candy!! Big congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/5/2015 1:25:00 PM
Thanks Robert, I appreciate your sweet words of support. Emile.
Date: 7/30/2015 2:29:00 PM
Loved the sweet comparisons of candy to a baby, Emile! Very creative, and congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/31/2015 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate your kind words of support. Emile.
Date: 7/30/2015 4:03:00 AM
this was one of my fave Emile! many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/30/2015 7:46:00 AM
Thanks Jan, as always, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/30/2015 3:43:00 AM
Emile, Congratulations on your SHWEET Free Verse Win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/30/2015 7:47:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, as always, I appreciate your unwavering support. Emile.
Date: 7/30/2015 2:31:00 AM
PS....... Congratulations on your wonderful win. LINDA
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Date: 7/30/2015 7:54:00 AM
As always LINDA, you take the time to encourage and support my writing, I'm so grateful for your friendship. Emile.
Date: 7/30/2015 2:30:00 AM
Emile, you know me, I love reading your poems when I can, better yet I enjoy how easy it is to fall for each and every one of your poems I read so far. I know this million dollar smile, it can warm my heart for miles. Everyone has an ever so sweet cutie pie.... Love it, Love it... LINDA
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Date: 7/30/2015 7:52:00 AM
Thanks ever so much LINDA, you're right, I do know you and your friendly words have warmed my heart. You are one my biggest fans and I treasure your input. Emile.
Date: 7/30/2015 12:45:00 AM
Back to say congrats on your win! Such a darling poem Emile! ~lee
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Date: 7/30/2015 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Lee, as always, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/29/2015 11:58:00 PM
How lovely is this Emile! Congrats on ur win!
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Date: 7/30/2015 7:56:00 AM
Thanks Upma, as always, I appreciate your kind support. Emile.
Date: 7/29/2015 11:53:00 PM
wow, what a cutie!! I don't know if that picture shows a baby of YOURS or if this is just fiction, but it is very very SHWEET!! Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 7/30/2015 7:58:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea, as always, I appreciate your support, it was my pleasure to participate in your contest. Emile.
Date: 7/25/2015 2:44:00 PM
A beautiful description of this little sweetie!... Your lines have a nice flow to them, which can be difficult to achieve with free verse. Nicely done, Emile! Good luck in Andrea's contest!
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Date: 7/25/2015 2:51:00 PM
Thanks Kelly, I truly appreciate your kind words of support. Emile.
Date: 7/24/2015 5:53:00 PM
Charming and sweet free verse Emile.
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Date: 7/24/2015 7:33:00 PM
Thanks Tim, as always, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/24/2015 3:09:00 PM
oh this is superb Emile! good luck in the contest i hope this does really well for you - I LOVE it:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:19:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your friendly comment. Emile.
Date: 7/24/2015 2:42:00 PM
Simply beautiful Emile, what a joy to read. Wish you a blessed weekend, James :)
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:18:00 PM
Thanks James, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/24/2015 11:00:00 AM
Oh my that's shweet! Sure to be at the top of the list! ~ lee
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Date: 7/24/2015 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Lee, I appreciate your support. Emile.