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Ever So Sweet

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My sweet baby girl is half-awake, half-asleep. And her toffee yawns are stretchy as caramel. Her cotton candy cheeks are like pink marshmallows. And dark chocolate curls; adorn my baby's head. She sports blueberry eyes and soft licorice lips. And her creamy face boasts a million-dollar smile. A confectionery treat, she is delicious. And gives sugared kisses; that taste; ever so sweet.

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Robert Lindley

Date: 8/1/2015 10:39:00 PM

Love this poem. Made me think of my daughter at age 6. She loved the candy!! Big congrats on your win!

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2015 1:25:00 PM

Thanks Robert, I appreciate your sweet words of support. Emile.

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/30/2015 2:29:00 PM

Loved the sweet comparisons of candy to a baby, Emile! Very creative, and congrats on your win :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/31/2015 9:04:00 AM

Thanks Laura, I appreciate your kind words of support. Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/30/2015 4:03:00 AM

this was one of my fave Emile! many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/30/2015 7:46:00 AM

Thanks Jan, as always, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Skat A

Date: 7/30/2015 3:43:00 AM

Emile, Congratulations on your SHWEET Free Verse Win. **SKAT**

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/30/2015 7:47:00 AM

Thanks SKAT, as always, I appreciate your unwavering support. Emile.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2015 2:31:00 AM

PS....... Congratulations on your wonderful win. LINDA

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/30/2015 7:54:00 AM

As always LINDA, you take the time to encourage and support my writing, I'm so grateful for your friendship. Emile.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2015 2:30:00 AM

Emile, you know me, I love reading your poems when I can, better yet I enjoy how easy it is to fall for each and every one of your poems I read so far. I know this million dollar smile, it can warm my heart for miles. Everyone has an ever so sweet cutie pie.... Love it, Love it... LINDA

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/30/2015 7:52:00 AM

Thanks ever so much LINDA, you're right, I do know you and your friendly words have warmed my heart. You are one my biggest fans and I treasure your input. Emile.

Lee Carter

Date: 7/30/2015 12:45:00 AM

Back to say congrats on your win! Such a darling poem Emile! ~lee

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/30/2015 7:55:00 AM

Thanks Lee, as always, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/29/2015 11:58:00 PM

How lovely is this Emile! Congrats on ur win!

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/30/2015 7:56:00 AM

Thanks Upma, as always, I appreciate your kind support. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2015 11:53:00 PM

wow, what a cutie!! I don't know if that picture shows a baby of YOURS or if this is just fiction, but it is very very SHWEET!! Congrats in my contest.

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/30/2015 7:58:00 AM

Thanks so much Andrea, as always, I appreciate your support, it was my pleasure to participate in your contest. Emile.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/25/2015 2:44:00 PM

A beautiful description of this little sweetie!... Your lines have a nice flow to them, which can be difficult to achieve with free verse. Nicely done, Emile! Good luck in Andrea's contest!

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/25/2015 2:51:00 PM

Thanks Kelly, I truly appreciate your kind words of support. Emile.