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Originally published: 29th May 2022

Poetry Soup's POEM OF THE DAY 31st May 2022

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Ever After

when the book of bedtime stories
kissed goodnight and turned the page
and was left to stand upon the shelf
to fox and spot with age

the bright sun lost the hat it wore 
and its face that always smiled
with those outstretched lines of beams that shone
inside of every child.
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Anderson Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 2:23 PM
A well-deserved win, Gary!
Radice Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 9:51 PM
Thanks so much Marguerite. Cheers - Gary
Anderson Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 2:20 PM
Wow, this fills me with the wonderment and imagination that books can bring to a child's mind! The "outstretched lines of beans" definitely got a hold of me!
Anderson Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 2:19 PM
Wow, this fills me with the wonderment and imagination that books can bring to a child's mind! The "outstretched lines of beans" definitely got a hold of me!
Radice Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 9:58 PM
I’m smiling Marguerite due to your typo: “ outstretched lines of beans" / beams. Hey, when it comes to children anything is possible :) Thanks again Marguerite. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I’ll have a read of your own winning poem later today. Cheers - Gary
Layne Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 9:29 AM
Thank you, Gary, for participating in the Month of the Child contest. I found your use of metaphor to be quite skillful here. Congratulations on your placement!
Radice Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 12:34 AM
Thank you Trina! Cheers - Gary
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 2:02 PM
Short but powerful. Well done. Belated congrats
Radice Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 10:24 PM
Thanks Andrea. Social media is teaching kids what to think these days wheras stories taught our generation how to think.My thoughts anyway :) Cheers - Gary
Ashley Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 8:41 AM
Dear Gary, the enchantment of bedtime stories should never lose their luster, but sadly, in today's world, I think they have. I adored bedtime stories as a child and always read to my children in the evenings too. I enjoyed it as much as an adult as I did as a child. They do ignite the imagination, the heart and soul, for sure. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest with your thoughtful and thought-provoking poem so beautifully done. Warmest wishes, my gifted poet friend.. ~Susan
Radice Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 11:18 AM
Thanks Susan :) I find it interesting when I look back on my older poems and wonder as to where my mindset was at at the time of writing them. It was great to read your comments and particularly: "I adored bedtime stories as a child and always read to my children in the evenings too. I enjoyed it as much as an adult as I did as a child. They do ignite the imagination, the heart and soul, for sure."...Yessss! I'm so with you all the way. :) I wrote down in my own notes when I originally wrote this poem that: "The poem pines for a lost time of bedtime stories, exalts the benefits reading has on a child's mind and acts as a metaphor of sorts for that period in a child's life when growing up means a certain loss of innocence and a gradual coming to terms with some of life's realities: no more bedtime stories and no more drawing of the sun with a hat or face." :). Cheers - Gary
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August 4, 2025 at 3:38 PM
Gary, congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 2 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. You took me back to the early years when we read to our sons. A Fav poem for me! Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 3 has already started.
Radice Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 3:00 AM
Thanks Mark. Bedtime reading, I'm convinced, helps build the solid foundation on which a child's imagination can grow. Cheers - Gary
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January 3, 2023 at 10:25 AM
Ah, the beauty and magic of bedtime stories for children Gary and the sadness when children, and parents, think they are too grown up for these magical tales sending us into the land of Nod! Every night before I go to sleep, I read a story! So many people read before they go to sleep. Must be a leftover from childhood. Never too old for a bedtime story! Congratulations on your win. Blessings of bedtime stories for the new year!
Radice Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 2:52 AM
Hi Sam. All the best for the New Year. I think bedtime stories provide the perfect foundation for a child's imagination to grow. I don't understand how, for many kids today, a tv or a cell phone at bedtime can stimulate their imagination but I guess this 61 year old would say that after all the fantastic nighttime reads I was party to as a child. :) Thanks again and Cheers - Gary
Kendrick Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 2:58 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara
Radice Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 7:43 AM
Thank you Sara. I hope all is well with you and your family. Have a lovely Christmas. Cheers - Gary
George Avatar
September 26, 2022 at 2:49 AM
When Bedtime stories are dumped to the shelves, the child inside us dies ! Gary, quite a meaningful poem expressed in sweet brevity!
Radice Avatar
September 26, 2022 at 1:59 PM
Hi Valsa. Yes..and a metaphor too for the loss of childhood innocence. Thank you for visit, read and lovely comments. Cheers - Gary
Mcconnell Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 7:04 AM
This is a rather good piece Gary, it's rather true what you said in another comment that when bedtime stories stop then childhood stops. A rather enlightening piece this is. -Gordon
Radice Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 12:45 PM
Thank you Gordon. They used to be an essential part of childhood. I'm not too sure anymore. Cheers - Gary
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July 12, 2022 at 1:22 PM
Happy Child Blessed childhood
Radice Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 9:55 PM
Hi Christopher. I used to love the bedtime stories as a kid. I think they helped develop my imagination. I suspect kids today take their mobile phones with them to bed or watch TV. Maybe I'm being unfair and stories still get told. I think that a stage in childhood passes once the bedtime stories stop. Cheers - Gary
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June 2, 2022 at 10:12 AM
Gary, this is so creative with wonderful images of bedtime stories bidding "goodnight" then "turns the page." What wonderful lines - a dynamic picture. You have reached deeply into the inner child in all of us. Congratulations on your POTD! Cheers!
Radice Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 11:38 PM
Thank you Sam for your lovely comments. Personally, I never did grow up..in fact I often feel that although my body has aged I often feel I'm growing down. :) Cheers - Gary
Meadows Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 10:25 PM
Well written. Congratulations on your POTD.
Radice Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 12:11 AM
Thank you Jeanette. Cheers - Gary
Nicole Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 7:01 PM
I will always find a way to stay in the sky, to drift in those cotton candy clouds. . . . Because reading can take you anywhere you want to go. My heart smiles knowing this truth. Congratulations Gary, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
Radice Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 12:14 AM
Hi Brandy. Thank you for your lovely, profound comments. I appreciate your visit. Cheers - Gary
Romios Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 2:27 PM
Just lovely. Congratulations Panagiota
Radice Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 3:14 PM
Thank you for your visit and congratulations Panagiota. I appreciate it. Cheers - Gary
Mcconnell Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 1:23 PM
Such a lovely piece Gary and well-deserving of the POTD. Blessings, Gordon
Radice Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 1:33 PM
Thank you Gordon and please give my regards to all North of the Border :) Cheers - Gary
La France Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 12:51 PM
Gary, very nice and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance
Radice Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 1:42 PM
Thank you Constance. Cheers - Gary
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 12:41 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
Radice Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 1:50 PM
Many Thanks Kim! Cheers - Gary
Lawless Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 11:40 AM
and I get to read them again to my great grandchildren.....beautifully done Gary
Radice Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 12:35 PM
Thanks so much John. I'm smiling at your comment because at one point I was playing around with a third stanza and the idea of the child growing up and reading to his own children but I never got far with it. Thanks again. Cheers - Gary
Watt Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 10:53 AM
Gary, happy to see this gem acknowledged with a POTD! Congrats, my friend ~ John
Watt Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 1:45 PM
Gary, I also am one who makes edits as I see fit, post-submission. I had no quarrel with v1.0 but I think your v2.0 strolls along at an even smoother gait. Well done.
Radice Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 11:31 AM
Thanks John! I've edited the poem a little since you last commented on it...sometimes I just can't leave poems alone. :) Cheers - Gary
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 9:10 AM
Back to congratulate you on having this wonderful poem honored for POTD Gary. Blessings xxoo
Radice Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 9:58 AM
Thanks so much Connie :) Cheers- Gary
Hankins Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 8:20 AM
Gary, just back to say CONGRATULATIONS for the well-deserved P.OT.D. I think I faved this poem. It is delightful.
Radice Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 8:45 AM
Hi Milt. Yes, you did fav it. Thanks so much for your continued support and encouragement. Cheers - Gary
May Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 8:18 AM
A story still beams inside, Congrats on POTD Gary
Radice Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 8:51 AM
Joseph, thanks so much for your visit and congratulations. Once a child no longer draws a hat on the sun or gives it a face I sense they are growing up. Cheers - Gary
Peck Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 7:51 AM
So sweet and sad when childhood ends. Congratulations on POTD.
Radice Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 8:47 AM
Agreed Ann. The naivety of childhood is a wonderful thing. Thanks. Cheers - Gary
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