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Eventuality, Befalls To Silence

Tapping fingers, pulse ~ The awaiting, ones sweating Anticipating ~ Message received, codes now read Slowly keys turn, silo's open ~ http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/war-8.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/13/2011 8:18:00 AM
Thought provoking poem. Such a creative perspective. Keep on writing my friend. Thank you for your comment. Karen
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Date: 2/13/2011 1:37:00 AM
Stunning write James, I love the anticipation you create with your Tanka, hope your weekend is a stunning one :) Wilma
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Date: 2/12/2011 4:00:00 AM
a thriller that thrills! wonderful, james.. hope this is for the dream tanka; winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:56:00 AM
deep one james. .much said here
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Date: 2/11/2011 9:02:00 PM
ooooh, was this for dream contest, more a nightmare!! Great title too, james.
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Date: 2/11/2011 8:18:00 PM
Yikes, That is one ominous write. Well done
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Date: 2/11/2011 5:55:00 PM
The world is always one button push away from massive destruction. Great descriptive tanka.
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