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Evening Storm


I drift as storm and night duet,
a dance amidst a choir of rain.
wrung clouds strum strong and passionate
to cart away my deepest pain.
In every grand, thunderous note,
God’s loving heart beats in my soul. 
Across the darkness, lightning floats,             
to heaven skyward, I extol.    
Winds sing with love blown rhythmically     
just like sweet-sounding nightingales. 
Clear sheets of rain course through lithe trees   
bending to meet the river dale. 
Then soft comes dawn, I praise the storm
in gleam of misty earth transformed.

For Shadow's Pick A Subject Contest, 3/4/15
*Subject - Storm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/7/2015 7:39:00 AM
Your stunning images bring the storm to life!
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Date: 3/6/2015 11:06:00 PM
Wow wow wow, this is so stunningly beautiful and the words flow of the tongue like sweet wine A7 for me!
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Date: 3/6/2015 2:45:00 AM
lovely win...Linda
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Date: 3/6/2015 12:42:00 AM
Hi Rhonda How are you? Congrats on win. Great poem indeed. Adding to my favlist.Hugs! Best wishes to you and your family. God bless....Rajat
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Date: 3/5/2015 4:25:00 PM
Beautiful...Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/5/2015 1:52:00 PM
Dear Rhonda, there have been sad times in my life when I felt like storms were carrying my pain away. Your sonnet has a powerful message and it flows beautifully. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/5/2015 7:49:00 AM
A lovely, flowing Sonnet, Rhonda. I like the way you let the storm be a comforting and uplifting experience for you. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/5/2015 7:28:00 AM
much enjoyed reading this poem Rhonda congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 3/4/2015 5:37:00 PM
Wonderful imagery as your write about the stormy sounds of thunder and nature. Well done! You should do well in the contest (as usual!) :)
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Date: 3/4/2015 11:00:00 AM
this is very beautiful, rhonda! good luck in the contest...
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Date: 3/4/2015 10:00:00 AM
Love the way your words flow. Good luck in the contest
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