Valsa George Poet Blank verse

Evening Sky

In the evening sky, wade the truant clouds
sailing ships over blue aquamarine
with the sweep of wind, they split and form
into configurations of varied shape n' size!
giants, mountains, bundles of fluffy wool
to be woven into yet a hundred patterns

13. Jan. 2022
Bite Size#32 Poetry Contest
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Line Gauthier November 12, 2022 at 1:19 PM Lovely imagery, Valsa ~

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2022 at 11:28 AM Love this one and its imagery, Valsa. Big congrats.

Kim Merryman January 21, 2022 at 9:45 AM I love the imagery in your poem, Valsa! Beautiful description of clouds! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Connie Marcum Wong January 21, 2022 at 12:16 AM Cloud watching is a hobby of mine. They are so exquisite as is this poem my friend. Just breathtaking! Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo Valsa George January 21, 2022 at 2:30 AM Only after seeing your comment, I remembered that I had participated in this contest.... and am placed third ! Thanks a lot dear Connie !

Robert James Liguori January 13, 2022 at 6:47 PM Sky can be quite beautiful, especially at twilight! Valsa George January 13, 2022 at 8:05 PM Yes, indeed ! Thanks Robert for your kind visit and comment...

Andrea Dietrich January 13, 2022 at 11:42 AM very nicely done. So descriptive, Valsa Valsa George January 13, 2022 at 5:17 PM Much gratitude dear Andrea ! Warm Greetings !

Anil Deo January 13, 2022 at 10:28 AM And woven into multitudinous poems. Yes, Valsa, few can ignore the draw, mystery, beauty ... Of the sky. Thanks for sharing. In His Peace Valsa George January 13, 2022 at 5:17 PM Anil , thank you so much for your beautiful words. Stay blessed. Love and peace :)

L Milton Hankins January 13, 2022 at 10:02 AM Marvelous writing in blank verse, Valsa. Truly enjoyed the read. Valsa George January 13, 2022 at 5:15 PM Thanks a lot Milton for your kind visit. Glad you enjoyed my poem.

Sotto Poet January 13, 2022 at 9:28 AM Valsa, your portrayal of the darkening sky was magnificent. It was like looking at stunningly beautiful artwork, with behemoths, peaks, and baskets of fuzzy yarn to be stitched into a myriad intricate variations. Best wishes for the contest. Valsa George January 13, 2022 at 5:13 PM Hi Lasaad, your comment is more than poetry ! Thank you for sparing so much of your time for such pictorial analysis of my poem. I feel so delighted by your beautiful words. Thanks a lot dear friend

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed January 13, 2022 at 7:26 AM truant clouds! what an ornamentation!! "sailing ships over blue aquamarine" so aesthetically dreamy, Valsa!! into configurations of varied shape n' size! - i feel like a child! into yet a hundred patterns!! - You are a Poet of grandeur!! amazing! Thanks for the poem, Dear Poet Valsa. - Marshall Valsa George January 13, 2022 at 7:51 AM Marshall, I feel so delighted by your word by word analysis and appreciation of my poems ..... ! Not enough words to thank you dear poet friend !

Kim Rodrigues January 13, 2022 at 6:15 AM Oh how we love the pictures in the night sky! Lovely! Valsa George January 13, 2022 at 7:48 AM Thanks a lot Kim ! You seem to mint poems after poems everyday and win several contests too.... ! Keep it up young lady :) :)

Vijay Pandit January 13, 2022 at 4:22 AM Much enjoyed your articulation of evening sky Valsa: giants, mountains, bundles of fluffy wool to be woven into yet a hundred patterns Valsa George January 13, 2022 at 7:45 AM Very grateful to you Vijay ! Have a great day!

Tom Cunningham January 13, 2022 at 4:00 AM Can just picture it Valsa, I often stare at the ever changing shapes in the sky, pareidolia they call it. Tom Valsa George January 13, 2022 at 7:44 AM We poets stare into the sky and get lost in the music of the ocean.... :) :) Thanks Tom for teaching me a new word- 'Pareidolia"

Victor Buhagiar January 13, 2022 at 3:55 AM Reminds me of Hamlet. Lovely poem. Victor Buhagiar January 13, 2022 at 9:40 AM Hamlet began to see forms in the clouds. Valsa George January 13, 2022 at 7:39 AM Long back I studied Hamlet.... don't remember it properly ! Thanks dear friend !

Anne-Lise Andresen January 13, 2022 at 3:16 AM - Like a beautiful painting, Valsa - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Valsa George January 13, 2022 at 7:38 AM Glad you feel so. Thanks a lot Anne....Love and hugs !