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Evening Sky

In the evening sky, wade the truant clouds sailing ships over blue aquamarine with the sweep of wind, they split and form into configurations of varied shape n' size! giants, mountains, bundles of fluffy wool to be woven into yet a hundred patterns 13. Jan. 2022 Bite Size#32 Poetry Contest Sponsor- Line Gauthier

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/12/2022 1:19:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Valsa ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2022 11:28:00 AM

Love this one and its imagery, Valsa. Big congrats.

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/21/2022 9:45:00 AM

I love the imagery in your poem, Valsa! Beautiful description of clouds! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/21/2022 12:16:00 AM

Cloud watching is a hobby of mine. They are so exquisite as is this poem my friend. Just breathtaking! Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo

Valsa George
Date: 1/21/2022 2:30:00 AM

Only after seeing your comment, I remembered that I had participated in this contest.... and am placed third ! Thanks a lot dear Connie !

Robert James Liguori

Date: 1/13/2022 6:47:00 PM

Sky can be quite beautiful, especially at twilight!

Valsa George
Date: 1/13/2022 8:05:00 PM

Yes, indeed ! Thanks Robert for your kind visit and comment...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2022 11:42:00 AM

very nicely done. So descriptive, Valsa

Valsa George
Date: 1/13/2022 5:17:00 PM

Much gratitude dear Andrea ! Warm Greetings !

Anil Deo

Date: 1/13/2022 10:28:00 AM

And woven into multitudinous poems. Yes, Valsa, few can ignore the draw, mystery, beauty ... Of the sky. Thanks for sharing. In His Peace

Valsa George
Date: 1/13/2022 5:17:00 PM

Anil , thank you so much for your beautiful words. Stay blessed. Love and peace :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 1/13/2022 10:02:00 AM

Marvelous writing in blank verse, Valsa. Truly enjoyed the read.

Valsa George
Date: 1/13/2022 5:15:00 PM

Thanks a lot Milton for your kind visit. Glad you enjoyed my poem.

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/13/2022 9:28:00 AM

Valsa, your portrayal of the darkening sky was magnificent. It was like looking at stunningly beautiful artwork, with behemoths, peaks, and baskets of fuzzy yarn to be stitched into a myriad intricate variations. Best wishes for the contest.

Valsa George
Date: 1/13/2022 5:13:00 PM

Hi Lasaad, your comment is more than poetry ! Thank you for sparing so much of your time for such pictorial analysis of my poem. I feel so delighted by your beautiful words. Thanks a lot dear friend

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/13/2022 7:26:00 AM

truant clouds! what an ornamentation!! "sailing ships over blue aquamarine" so aesthetically dreamy, Valsa!! into configurations of varied shape n' size! - i feel like a child! into yet a hundred patterns!! - You are a Poet of grandeur!! amazing! Thanks for the poem, Dear Poet Valsa. - Marshall

Valsa George
Date: 1/13/2022 7:51:00 AM

Marshall, I feel so delighted by your word by word analysis and appreciation of my poems ..... ! Not enough words to thank you dear poet friend !

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/13/2022 6:15:00 AM

Oh how we love the pictures in the night sky! Lovely!

Valsa George
Date: 1/13/2022 7:48:00 AM

Thanks a lot Kim ! You seem to mint poems after poems everyday and win several contests too.... ! Keep it up young lady :) :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/13/2022 4:22:00 AM

Much enjoyed your articulation of evening sky Valsa: giants, mountains, bundles of fluffy wool to be woven into yet a hundred patterns

Valsa George
Date: 1/13/2022 7:45:00 AM

Very grateful to you Vijay ! Have a great day!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/13/2022 4:00:00 AM

Can just picture it Valsa, I often stare at the ever changing shapes in the sky, pareidolia they call it. Tom

Valsa George
Date: 1/13/2022 7:44:00 AM

We poets stare into the sky and get lost in the music of the ocean.... :) :) Thanks Tom for teaching me a new word- 'Pareidolia"

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/13/2022 3:55:00 AM

Reminds me of Hamlet. Lovely poem.

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 1/13/2022 9:40:00 AM

Hamlet began to see forms in the clouds.

Valsa George
Date: 1/13/2022 7:39:00 AM

Long back I studied Hamlet.... don't remember it properly ! Thanks dear friend !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/13/2022 3:16:00 AM

- Like a beautiful painting, Valsa - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Valsa George
Date: 1/13/2022 7:38:00 AM

Glad you feel so. Thanks a lot Anne....Love and hugs !