Evening Senryus

evening breezes cool 
shadows creep across my lawn
my heart hears the night

trees whisper secrets
leaves stir in the fading light
my mind breathes a sigh

twilight comes softly
sunlight beams one last farewell
my soul finds its rest


Morning, Noon or Night Contest
by Steven Mossburg
8-25-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 8:52 PM
wowie zowie, truly a deserved win with THIS one, Steven!! VERY nice. I chose evenings too.
Poet Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 10:21 PM
Congrats Steven on your win in Francine's contest.Enjoyed your Senryus very much.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 10:15 PM
Congrats Steven on your brilliant win and top ten victory with this beautiful entry luv..
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 6:42 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Sara
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 7:40 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved winning piece Steven. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 3:21 AM
hey Steven congrats on your win, David
Roberts Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 11:38 PM
congrats on your 10th place win in the contest Steven
La France Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 4:17 PM
Beautiful, best of luck in the contest with these winners and thanks for your comments on my poetry~~
Gorelick Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 8:30 PM
Awesome..I enjoyed very much..BG
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