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Evening Panorama

Evening Panorama When the moon is intransigent to a gloomy cloud Stars filching to stare the horizon Sparkling luster luring across the sea Lunged me to stroll along the seashore Hear the wave’s commotion Offshore to see slowly vanishing lamp light from a fisherman’s boat Some nocturnal species tending to be gregarious Envy of a fishwife for darkness captured her fisherman’s heart Beside me is an old lighthouse Pirouetting the pulchritude of the sea Luminous as a pathfinder for mariners Showing panorama for such piscatorial area World-weary, I indulged into stargazing Starry-eyed that evening to the starlight The visage of a departed loved ones I yielded to cease being awake to the whooshing sea waves Honorable mention to Laura Mckenzie's Beyond Nightfall Contest: 3/20/2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/11/2010 10:41:00 PM
Congratulations..a well deserved win..Charma:)
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Date: 3/8/2010 10:33:00 PM
Congratulations to you, Noel. May you have many more. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/8/2010 12:10:00 PM
Noel, many congratulations on your win in Laura's fine contest with this gem. What a delight to read >> James
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Date: 3/8/2010 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Laura's Beyond Nightfall! contest Noel. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2010 5:01:00 AM
enjoyed
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Date: 3/7/2010 9:46:00 PM
Lovely poetry, here. Congratulations on your recognition. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/7/2010 9:13:00 PM
Congrats Noel on your HM in Laura's contest.. a wonderful write and win for u to so enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/7/2010 7:17:00 PM
Congratulations Noel, for your Honorable Mention in the Poetry Soup member contest: Beyond Nightfall! I can see why you did so well! Nice work.! Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/7/2010 12:40:00 AM
Full of memorable imagery Noel.Lik it.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts today.
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Date: 3/6/2010 10:04:00 PM
Very nice write, Noel and beautiful imagery throughout. Thanks for taking us out there with you. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/5/2010 11:40:00 PM
I love this poem,awesome..Charma
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Date: 3/5/2010 9:52:00 PM
this is full of imagery, Noel. Very lovely!! And the title is very fitting! LUv, Andrea
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