Evening Panorama

Evening Panorama


 
When the moon is intransigent to a gloomy cloud
Stars filching to stare the horizon
Sparkling luster luring across the sea
Lunged me to stroll along the seashore

Hear the wave’s commotion
Offshore to see slowly vanishing lamp light from a fisherman’s boat
Some nocturnal species tending to be gregarious
Envy of a fishwife for darkness captured her fisherman’s heart

Beside me is an old lighthouse
Pirouetting the pulchritude of the sea
Luminous as a pathfinder for mariners
Showing panorama for such piscatorial area

World-weary, I indulged into stargazing
Starry-eyed that evening to the starlight
The visage of a departed loved ones
I yielded to cease being awake to the whooshing sea waves


Honorable mention to Laura Mckenzie's Beyond Nightfall Contest: 3/20/2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/11/2010 10:41:00 PM
Congratulations..a well deserved win..Charma:)
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Date: 3/8/2010 10:33:00 PM
Congratulations to you, Noel. May you have many more. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/8/2010 12:10:00 PM
Noel, many congratulations on your win in Laura's fine contest with this gem. What a delight to read >> James
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Date: 3/8/2010 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Laura's Beyond Nightfall! contest Noel. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2010 5:01:00 AM
enjoyed
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Date: 3/7/2010 9:46:00 PM
Lovely poetry, here. Congratulations on your recognition. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/7/2010 9:13:00 PM
Congrats Noel on your HM in Laura's contest.. a wonderful write and win for u to so enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/7/2010 7:17:00 PM
Congratulations Noel, for your Honorable Mention in the Poetry Soup member contest: Beyond Nightfall! I can see why you did so well! Nice work.! Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/7/2010 12:40:00 AM
Full of memorable imagery Noel.Lik it.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts today.
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Date: 3/6/2010 10:04:00 PM
Very nice write, Noel and beautiful imagery throughout. Thanks for taking us out there with you. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/5/2010 11:40:00 PM
I love this poem,awesome..Charma
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Date: 3/5/2010 9:52:00 PM
this is full of imagery, Noel. Very lovely!! And the title is very fitting! LUv, Andrea
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