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08/17/24

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Eight Words - 2

Second place 

Contest by Joseph May.

Relaxing idle mood at evening, playing a sad tune on GUITAR. Scent of LILACS flowing in Spring. Butterflies sleep, sipping nectar. On sundown encompassing dusk. Relaxing idle mood at evening. Eve merging night with MISTY mask. Birds back to nest with WEARY wings. Without you , life finds no meaning. You are to CAJOLE steps of mine. Relaxing idle mood at evening. Moon wakes from SLUMBER, now to shine. Reminiscing your touch, I SIGH. On vase , your name I am ETCHING. Praying your closeness to be nigh. Relaxing idle mood at evening.

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Date: 9/2/2024 3:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Joseph's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your creative talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 8/29/2024 7:48:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Date: 8/28/2024 5:01:00 AM
congratulations dear poet. cheers.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/29/2024 6:33:00 AM
Thanks. Blessings
Date: 8/27/2024 8:00:00 AM
Congrats on your win Anisha, Very nicely penned
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/29/2024 6:33:00 AM
Thanks Joseph for appreciation. Blessings

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