Evening In Chrome

Chrome...metallic clouds,
Illustrated elegance;
Subdued by darkness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/21/2009 8:07:00 AM
The poet write with opened eyes ... using sweet pens of feeling ... I feel it.
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Date: 5/20/2009 10:11:00 PM
Man I just can't get over your choice of words Raul. It's beautiful! Check your mail too. Nate
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Date: 5/18/2009 11:28:00 PM
Unique perspective at this, subdued by night, nice line.
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Date: 5/18/2009 3:49:00 AM
What beautiful imagery. A sight worth seeing whether by imagination or reality "Chrome...metalic clouds" wow, another amazing Haiku. Smiles from Lolita to the Haiku Master!
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Date: 5/17/2009 10:09:00 PM
Chrome...metallic clouds, great job. DN
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Date: 5/17/2009 5:22:00 PM
Very beautiful........so much inspiration in it all, great job!!!!!!!!
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Date: 5/17/2009 3:04:00 PM
What an interesting and creative take on clouds, Raul! Once again, we must bow to the haiku master. Awesome poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/17/2009 8:58:00 AM
love the metallic clouds, Raul, very nice - and oh, so dark! thanks for your comments by the way, from one haiku lover to another, thank you. love, Kristin
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Date: 5/17/2009 8:12:00 AM
This is excellent. I like your imaginative spirit. This shows brilliance in creativity. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 5/17/2009 7:11:00 AM
You are a master with this form..you write music my friend..brilliant.
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Date: 5/17/2009 12:23:00 AM
Very pictureque poetry Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 5/16/2009 8:54:00 PM
Raul, this is a rare and beautiful piece. I'm sending this to my favs. You should compile all your Haiku's and publish a book. BG
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Date: 5/16/2009 8:22:00 PM
I Aboslty love that first line it sets the whole poem! I can just image what it looks like!
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