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Evening In Chrome

Chrome...metallic clouds,
Illustrated elegance;
Subdued by darkness.

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L'Nass Shango

May 21, 2009 at 8:07 AM

The poet write with opened eyes ... using sweet pens of feeling ... I feel it.

Nathan Leccese

May 20, 2009 at 10:11 PM

Man I just can't get over your choice of words Raul. It's beautiful! Check your mail too. Nate

Elizabeth Neal

May 18, 2009 at 11:28 PM

Unique perspective at this, subdued by night, nice line.

Lena Townsend

May 18, 2009 at 3:49 AM

What beautiful imagery. A sight worth seeing whether by imagination or reality "Chrome...metalic clouds" wow, another amazing Haiku. Smiles from Lolita to the Haiku Master!

Daniel Neal

May 17, 2009 at 10:09 PM

Chrome...metallic clouds, great job. DN

Jessica K

May 17, 2009 at 5:22 PM

Very beautiful........so much inspiration in it all, great job!!!!!!!!

Carolyn Devonshire

May 17, 2009 at 3:04 PM

What an interesting and creative take on clouds, Raul! Once again, we must bow to the haiku master. Awesome poem! Love, Carolyn

Kristin Reynolds

May 17, 2009 at 8:58 AM

love the metallic clouds, Raul, very nice - and oh, so dark! thanks for your comments by the way, from one haiku lover to another, thank you. love, Kristin