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Evening

The afternoon spilt gold on the hills, Now the hills are dreamy eyelids Fringing the lake's silver eye, And the evening sky lies still. For an hour or two this sunset, Day mingles with the night, Making beautiful orange-pink banners, As the dark stretches out the light. The last birds capture colour on their wings, All over the world hear voices sing In praise to the Maker of everything.

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Date: 1/30/2024 10:11:00 PM
Loved 'dreamy eyelids'... and 'mingles with the night'. Wonderful poem.
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 1/30/2024 10:16:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed this one. J :)
Date: 1/30/2024 7:41:00 PM
The last birds capture colour on their wings…lovely!
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 1/30/2024 9:12:00 PM
Happy memories (except for the mozzies)
Date: 1/27/2024 3:58:00 AM
Illuminating imagery, magic metaphors and apt scene depiction found in this cleverly constructed piece. Heartfelt thanks for your constructive comments on my recent post Ascension Ladder Seraph. They mean everything to me. Howard
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 1/27/2024 4:05:00 AM
Writing helps us all think and see more. Keep writing:)
Date: 1/22/2024 2:44:00 AM
A beautiful poem, especially the first verse. Well done.
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 1/22/2024 3:15:00 AM
Thank you. :)

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