Evening

What person would dare decry
the wonder of sunset's sky.
Before light begins to fade
Sunset's colors on parade!

Crimson, gold, even a pink.
we pause and begin to think
Of Nature's wonder, her gift,
dusting world with golden sift.

Soon dusk spills shadows on field,
nudges mountain top to yield.
Silhouettes of lilac blue
dapple Earth in softest hue.

Sunset abdicates her hold
on a world she turned to gold.
Night arrives in ebon skirt, 
and begins her starlit flirt.

April 4, 2023
for "Write A Jueju-Qijue Poetry Contest"
by Emile Pinet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 5/24/2023 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Emile's contest. Way to go. Creative work for sure. Sara
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/24/2023 8:39:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sara!
Date: 5/23/2023 2:53:00 PM
I love this imagery. BIG congrats on your win.
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/24/2023 8:40:00 AM
Thanks again, Andrea! I appreciate your comments.
Date: 5/22/2023 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations Ann! Your poem "Evening" came in "Third Place" in my contest, your personification of sunset was unique and earned you a podium position. Your poem quickly caught my eye; well done my friend, Emile.
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/24/2023 8:38:00 AM
Thank you so much, Emile! I really loved this form!
Date: 4/4/2023 3:57:00 PM
Very nice poem Miss Ann... scintillating!
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/5/2023 2:52:00 PM
Thank you very much, Clifford!
Date: 4/4/2023 12:56:00 PM
this is really really nice. So pretty!
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/4/2023 1:57:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! I'm not going to have time to write one for Constance's R contest. I've got some catching up to do in house and yard. Best of luck to you!
Date: 4/4/2023 12:06:00 PM
What a wonderful reflection on watching a twilight sunset in all of its glory! Love the last line - "starlit flirt" indeed! You always come up with such original imagery. Love to see what you are going to think of next! Blessings! Happy Easter. Best wishes for the contest!
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/5/2023 9:36:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Sam! I was intrigued by the form--Jueju-Qijue, with 7 syllables. Interesting. You're the one with wonderful imagery!
Date: 4/4/2023 12:00:00 PM
Perfectly executed, Ann. I love watching the sunsets. I also love your imagery in this poem. A pleasure to read you today:)
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/4/2023 1:50:00 PM
Thanks so much, Daniel! Sunsets end the day so lovingly.
Date: 4/4/2023 11:12:00 AM
- You describe the perfect evening from the golden sunset to the diamonds in the night sky... really beautiful, Ann - Best wishes in the contest :) - Happy Easter :) - hugs
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/4/2023 11:57:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sunshine! I like to write about that subject so many possibilities. :) A very Happy Easter to you, too!
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