Evening--Acrostic

Every sunset brings back same melancholy
veil of twilight weeps over the silent earth
even chirping crickets stop to listen to her cry
nest bound birds forget their songs for a moment
in the sky stars wake up one by one
nobody comes though my door is partly open
gardenia too forgets to send me message.







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Placement --3rd (Oct--2013)

Contest--Acrostic poem

Sponsor--Andrea Dietrich

© kash poet (kashinath karmakar)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/13/2013 3:32:00 PM
So beautiful this is.Im so in love with your last line.
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Date: 10/9/2013 7:43:00 AM
Last line is very fresh & evocative, maybe an 's' on gardenia? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 10/8/2013 8:11:00 PM
nice word Kash, ................... congrats on your win......belated happy birthday..... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/8/2013 3:02:00 PM
Kash, congrats on your winning placement in the acrostic challenge contest! You even make loneliness lovely...Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/8/2013 11:17:00 AM
a wonderful win Kash, , congratulations on your Acrostics challenge...love Linda
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Date: 10/6/2013 7:02:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..I like the line "gardenia forgets to send me a message"..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting..Sara
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Date: 10/5/2013 6:44:00 PM
gorgeous write....congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/5/2013 12:08:00 AM
Kash, I almost gave this a number two spot, it is SO good. love it love it. Congratulations and thanks for doing such a great job in my contest.
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Date: 9/29/2013 9:28:00 AM
wow wow wow.......the lonely feel of this poem just knocks my socks off........ that last line is spell-binding and so so melancholy. How I love this ! ps...soupmail reply.......and thank you!!
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Date: 9/29/2013 4:51:00 AM
kash, wowowi!.... you make me drool in the gush of your evening's spell... glad to see you penning again!.. :) huggs
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Date: 9/27/2013 2:28:00 PM
You have cure command of this write my friend! I love this entry into Andrea's contest, a very spectacular poem! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a stupendous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/27/2013 10:10:00 AM
words are nice.
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Date: 9/27/2013 9:09:00 AM
This is very very beautiful Kash...I'm always impressed by your command of words... Fantastic and dreamy in a melancholy way....
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