Tom Cunningham Poet Lanterne

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Evenfall and Nightfall

Sea
                                            Shimmers
                                           Shining Sun
                                         Slowly Sinking
                                               Sets
                                                ~
                                               Stars
                                             Sparkle
                                          Silver Specks
                                           Spectacular
                                                Sky




Written 11th March 2019

For light up the page 2 poetry contest

Sponsored by Joseph May.

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Valsa George February 8, 2023 at 8:19 PM Simply beautiful. Both the day and night splendidly arrayed! Tom Cunningham February 9, 2023 at 1:52 AM Thank you very much Valsa, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom

Sara Kendrick January 20, 2022 at 1:16 PM Congrats on this great winning work. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it. Your presence at my page always is supportive. Thank you. Sara Tom Cunningham January 20, 2022 at 1:45 PM Thank you very much Sara, im pleased that you enjoyed it. Tom

Kim Rodrigues May 30, 2019 at 3:15 PM Soothing with loveliness! Tom Cunningham May 30, 2019 at 3:33 PM Thank you Kim. Tom

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 19, 2019 at 11:46 AM Spectacular penning Tom! Congratulations on your win :) xomo! Tom Cunningham March 19, 2019 at 1:03 PM Thank you Maureen. Tom.

Andrea Dietrich March 17, 2019 at 5:49 PM This is gorgeous. Congrats on your fine win, Tom Tom Cunningham March 18, 2019 at 3:49 AM Thank you Andrea. Using same letter for each word was challenging. Tom.

Gordon Mcconnell March 17, 2019 at 4:10 PM Nice one Tom, congrats on your win! Have a blessed week, Gordon Tom Cunningham March 18, 2019 at 3:48 AM Thank you Gordon, I hope you do too. Tom

Nette Onclaud March 17, 2019 at 2:06 PM sending laurels for you fine win, tom... congratrs!..huggs Tom Cunningham March 18, 2019 at 3:47 AM Thank you very much nette, glad you liked it. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2019 at 8:29 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Tom Cunningham March 17, 2019 at 12:26 PM Thank you Sunshine. Tom.

Connie Marcum Wong March 17, 2019 at 2:25 AM Congratulations on your first placement Tom! I hope you enjoy St. Patrick's Day! xxoo : ) Tom Cunningham March 17, 2019 at 2:50 AM Thank you very much Connie Tom

Alexis Y. March 17, 2019 at 12:26 AM Hi Tom, You penned a good entry for the contest. It's such a lovely sight. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis Tom Cunningham March 17, 2019 at 2:08 AM Thank you very much Alexis. Tom

Joseph May March 16, 2019 at 5:00 PM Very nicely done Tom... Congrats on your win.. Tom Cunningham March 16, 2019 at 6:18 PM Thank you Joseph, I must say it was challenging but I kept at it. Thanks too for hosting. Tom.

Carolyn Devonshire March 15, 2019 at 6:31 AM Even without the photos, your image is created vividly through your words, Tom. Love the way you ably alliterated so many "S" words, too. Surely a winner, my friend. Best wishes for success, Carolyn Tom Cunningham March 15, 2019 at 6:34 AM Thank you Carolyn, I did find it a bit tricky, the S section in my dictionary is well thumbed lol. Tom

Arturo Michael March 15, 2019 at 12:48 AM I like the swing of words...gives a magical feel... Tom Cunningham March 15, 2019 at 4:24 AM Thanks Arturo, glad you liked it. Tom

Caren Krutsinger March 14, 2019 at 7:15 PM Peaceful, and makes me smile. Easing me into loving poetry, Tom. Tom Cunningham March 15, 2019 at 4:24 AM Thank you Caren. Tom.

Harry Horsman March 14, 2019 at 4:37 PM So much tranquillity in your poem, Tom. so small, yet the impact awesome. Tom Cunningham March 15, 2019 at 4:23 AM Thank you Harry. Tom.

Heidi Sands March 14, 2019 at 4:16 PM Beautiful Tom! I am happy to see this :) Tom Cunningham March 15, 2019 at 4:22 AM Thank you very much Heidi . Tom

Jennifer Proxenos March 13, 2019 at 2:02 PM Hi Tom, Your contrast in your poems is excellent, breathtaking - I agree with Dear Heart , definitely predict it is best for a win! Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Tom Cunningham March 13, 2019 at 3:08 PM Thank you very much Jennifer. Tom.

Constance La France March 13, 2019 at 12:26 PM Tom, wonderfully penned, looks like a winner to me ~ Tom Cunningham March 13, 2019 at 12:58 PM Thank you very much D.H. Tom.

Ravi Sathasivam March 13, 2019 at 2:02 AM Excellent and great imagery of sun setting and brighten stars. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it Tom Cunningham March 13, 2019 at 5:06 AM Thank you Ravi, happy you liked it. Tom.

Timothy Mcguire March 12, 2019 at 8:46 PM The sun is reflecting brightly off of this poem. Tom Cunningham March 13, 2019 at 5:06 AM Thank you very much Timothy. Tom.

Andrea Dietrich March 12, 2019 at 6:24 PM Nicely done. (I know Joseph has concerns some did not understand his rules but to me, this looks like you got it) Tom Cunningham March 13, 2019 at 5:05 AM Thanks Andrea, not easy getting all the words you want.to start with the same.letter. Tom

P.S. Awtry March 12, 2019 at 4:52 PM Tom, this is so pretty! Reads like a winner! Tom Cunningham March 13, 2019 at 5:05 AM Thank you P.S, glad you.liked it. Tom.

Charles Messina March 12, 2019 at 1:59 PM Well done, Tom. You have really lit up the sky with this one! Good Luck in the contest. Charlie Tom Cunningham March 12, 2019 at 2:13 PM Thanks very much Charlie, took some doing though. Tom.

Nette Onclaud March 12, 2019 at 1:43 PM swooning over the magic of your glittered words, tom... shine on my friend!...huggs Tom Cunningham March 12, 2019 at 1:48 PM Thank you Nette, must admit it took me a while to find the words I wanted. Hope you're well. Tom.

Sandra Haight March 12, 2019 at 9:59 AM A lovely, well-written Lanterne, Tom! Best wishes for the contest. Sandra Tom Cunningham March 12, 2019 at 10:12 AM Thank you Sandra, this is the second one that I have ever done. Tom.

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