Evenfall and Nightfall

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Sea
                                            Shimmers
                                           Shining Sun
                                         Slowly Sinking
                                               Sets
                                                ~
                                               Stars
                                             Sparkle
                                          Silver Specks
                                           Spectacular
                                                Sky




Written 11th March 2019

For light up the page 2 poetry contest

Sponsored by Joseph May.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 2/8/2023 8:19:00 PM
Simply beautiful. Both the day and night splendidly arrayed!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/9/2023 1:52:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 1/20/2022 1:16:00 PM
Congrats on this great winning work. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it. Your presence at my page always is supportive. Thank you. Sara
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Date: 1/20/2022 1:45:00 PM
Thank you very much Sara, im pleased that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 5/30/2019 3:15:00 PM
Soothing with loveliness!
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Date: 5/30/2019 3:33:00 PM
Thank you Kim. Tom
Date: 3/19/2019 11:46:00 AM
Spectacular penning Tom! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!
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Date: 3/19/2019 1:03:00 PM
Thank you Maureen. Tom.
Date: 3/17/2019 5:49:00 PM
This is gorgeous. Congrats on your fine win, Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/18/2019 3:49:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. Using same letter for each word was challenging. Tom.
Date: 3/17/2019 4:10:00 PM
Nice one Tom, congrats on your win! Have a blessed week, Gordon
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Date: 3/18/2019 3:48:00 AM
Thank you Gordon, I hope you do too. Tom
Date: 3/17/2019 2:06:00 PM
sending laurels for you fine win, tom... congratrs!..huggs
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Date: 3/18/2019 3:47:00 AM
Thank you very much nette, glad you liked it. Tom
Date: 3/17/2019 8:29:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/17/2019 12:26:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine. Tom.
Date: 3/17/2019 2:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your first placement Tom! I hope you enjoy St. Patrick's Day! xxoo : )
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Date: 3/17/2019 2:50:00 AM
Thank you very much Connie Tom
Date: 3/17/2019 12:26:00 AM
Hi Tom, You penned a good entry for the contest. It's such a lovely sight. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/17/2019 2:08:00 AM
Thank you very much Alexis. Tom
Date: 3/16/2019 5:00:00 PM
Very nicely done Tom... Congrats on your win..
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Date: 3/16/2019 6:18:00 PM
Thank you Joseph, I must say it was challenging but I kept at it. Thanks too for hosting. Tom.
Date: 3/15/2019 6:31:00 AM
Even without the photos, your image is created vividly through your words, Tom. Love the way you ably alliterated so many "S" words, too. Surely a winner, my friend. Best wishes for success, Carolyn
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Date: 3/15/2019 6:34:00 AM
Thank you Carolyn, I did find it a bit tricky, the S section in my dictionary is well thumbed lol. Tom
Date: 3/15/2019 12:48:00 AM
I like the swing of words...gives a magical feel...
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Date: 3/15/2019 4:24:00 AM
Thanks Arturo, glad you liked it. Tom
Date: 3/14/2019 7:15:00 PM
Peaceful, and makes me smile. Easing me into loving poetry, Tom.
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Date: 3/15/2019 4:24:00 AM
Thank you Caren. Tom.
Date: 3/14/2019 4:37:00 PM
So much tranquillity in your poem, Tom. so small, yet the impact awesome.
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Date: 3/15/2019 4:23:00 AM
Thank you Harry. Tom.
Date: 3/14/2019 4:16:00 PM
Beautiful Tom! I am happy to see this :)
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Date: 3/15/2019 4:22:00 AM
Thank you very much Heidi . Tom
Date: 3/13/2019 6:09:00 PM
Very beautiful and soothing poem!
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Date: 3/14/2019 3:05:00 AM
Thank you very much Arthur. Tom.
Date: 3/13/2019 2:02:00 PM
Hi Tom, Your contrast in your poems is excellent, breathtaking - I agree with Dear Heart , definitely predict it is best for a win! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/13/2019 3:08:00 PM
Thank you very much Jennifer. Tom.
Date: 3/13/2019 12:26:00 PM
Tom, wonderfully penned, looks like a winner to me ~
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Date: 3/13/2019 12:58:00 PM
Thank you very much D.H. Tom.
Date: 3/13/2019 2:02:00 AM
Excellent and great imagery of sun setting and brighten stars. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it
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Date: 3/13/2019 5:06:00 AM
Thank you Ravi, happy you liked it. Tom.
Date: 3/12/2019 8:46:00 PM
The sun is reflecting brightly off of this poem.
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Date: 3/13/2019 5:06:00 AM
Thank you very much Timothy. Tom.
Date: 3/12/2019 6:24:00 PM
Nicely done. (I know Joseph has concerns some did not understand his rules but to me, this looks like you got it)
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Date: 3/13/2019 5:05:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, not easy getting all the words you want.to start with the same.letter. Tom
Date: 3/12/2019 4:52:00 PM
Tom, this is so pretty! Reads like a winner!
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Date: 3/13/2019 5:05:00 AM
Thank you P.S, glad you.liked it. Tom.
Date: 3/12/2019 1:59:00 PM
Well done, Tom. You have really lit up the sky with this one! Good Luck in the contest. Charlie
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Date: 3/12/2019 2:13:00 PM
Thanks very much Charlie, took some doing though. Tom.
Date: 3/12/2019 1:43:00 PM
swooning over the magic of your glittered words, tom... shine on my friend!...huggs
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2019 1:48:00 PM
Thank you Nette, must admit it took me a while to find the words I wanted. Hope you're well. Tom.
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