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evenfall clad in dark green. sable, outflanking she. gray wispy clouds flee; moonglow slight. the wolf, silently present. present, his aroused eyes shushing irises long hair, leaves on canvas howl. dark brush brightens moon. 5/7/2020 Pick-A-Title, Vol 17 - Yalto - Poetry Contest Yalto Form: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5, 6,1,5 syllables. Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 5/22/2020 2:16:00 AM
Great imagery and verse, Kim, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/20/2020 3:38:00 PM
This is so unique and lovely Kim! Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2020 4:26:00 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 5/20/2020 10:39:00 AM
So evocative of the sights and sounds and feel of dusk and nightfall. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2020 4:25:00 PM
Thanks so much, John!
Date: 5/20/2020 8:31:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Kim--Congrats on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2020 4:25:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 5/20/2020 8:08:00 AM
Love the images in your poem. They portray such real pictures! Congratulations Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2020 8:09:00 AM
Thank you, Aditi!
Date: 5/20/2020 6:46:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on winning my contest with this superb Yalto, Kim;-) Beautiful imagery!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2020 7:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Edward! You know I enjoy the Yalto form! Hugs...Kim
Date: 5/7/2020 9:33:00 PM
Fascinating images your poem conjures (and the formatting makes it look like those helicopter-seeds in a twirl as they fall towards the ground). The most dramatic part in the poem for me was the "aroused eyes shushing irises" ... it evokes a sudden stillness and paints the wolf in a majestic light. I keep meaning to try this zany form and keep forgetting!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2020 9:35:00 PM
Thank you, Timothy! I appreciate your comments.
Date: 5/7/2020 3:53:00 PM
This is lovely poem. I haven't checked out that form. Thank you for your remarks on my Finding their Use. It was for a contest too. Love, Joyce
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2020 5:58:00 PM
Thank you, Joyce!
Date: 5/7/2020 9:57:00 AM
the wolf silently present. I love this line, a great poem Kim! Always watch for that sneaky wolf.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2020 9:58:00 AM
Yes! Thank you, Mark!

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