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Even the Stars

When darkness overtakes and tears melt into sadness I think to myself I’m not alone even the stars are blue And when I make mistakes when purpose seems pointless I say to myself you’ve always known even the stars fall When they falter or seem to lose their luster and they appear as distant as peace on earth I cherish the light they’ve shone and think, even the stars even the stars

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Date: 10/10/2020 3:32:00 PM
Hello Mike Gentile, i have never seen a fallen star.I love the stars they are shiny with a full moon the stars look better. Enjoy your evening my friend. xxxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/15/2020 10:10:00 AM
Hello Mike, you are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. xxxx-oooo.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/12/2020 4:10:00 AM
Thanks so much Darlene xxoo
Date: 6/30/2020 9:55:00 AM
Large and small -- people and stars having this in common -- God sees and loves us equally.... Love this little gem of yours Mike!!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/30/2020 10:21:00 AM
Thanks so much Joe!
Date: 6/22/2020 7:11:00 PM
'Even the stars' is so poetic, Mike. Love the way you've utilized it. Great write. Light and Joy, Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/23/2020 5:53:00 AM
Thanks GW and Happy Tuesday !!!
Date: 6/22/2020 4:09:00 PM
Wow! I love this ! It is a favorite for me. Happy Monday :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/22/2020 6:18:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi, Happy Monday xxoo
Date: 6/21/2020 10:16:00 AM
Even the stars.... lovely thoughts
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/21/2020 2:28:00 PM
Thank you Silent One!! I hope you've been well !
Date: 6/20/2020 9:03:00 PM
Even a faint glimmer of light gives us hope. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/21/2020 6:09:00 AM
So true Tom, Thanks !!
Date: 6/20/2020 2:01:00 PM
Beautiful message of hope. I'm feeling blue myself tonight. These was encouraging. Blessings.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/20/2020 2:41:00 PM
Thank you so much Eileen! I hope you find cheer soon! Happy Saturday xxoo
Date: 6/20/2020 12:05:00 PM
Oh Mike, this is wonderful. Fave'n for safekeeping. Mo hugs! xomo
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/20/2020 12:47:00 PM
Thanks so much Mo xxoo ' Happy Saturday !!
Date: 6/20/2020 10:28:00 AM
Awesome message in your brilliant poem, Mike. The ending stanza resonates, especially the two ending lines.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/20/2020 11:55:00 AM
Thanks so much Vijay!! Happy Saturday!

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