Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Fibonacci

Notes About The Poem

- Even Tears Freeze -

Cold,
numb 
In my
deep depths of
vanished existence
Runs in darkness without a goal
I never resting, goes in opposite directions
Unknown in wilderness without qualification, even tears freeze to ice crystals








03.01.2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
Writing Challenge January, 2019
 - Poetry Contest -
Sponsored by: Dear Heart 
Fibonacci :  1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21
1st place in the contest


Poem of the Day: 05.01.2019

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Quoth Theraven September 14, 2019 at 10:21 PM Sunshine, Even Tears Freeze. Even now in Summer's late genuflection. -Richard Anne-Lise Andresen September 15, 2019 at 6:07 AM - Maybe ... even in the late summer, Richard - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anna Nixon January 29, 2019 at 5:09 AM this speaks to my soul Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2019 at 12:15 PM - A pleasure Anna, many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu January 22, 2019 at 3:14 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, just beautifully done. Have a nice day my friend. Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2019 at 2:35 AM - Many thanks for visiting and comment, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark J. Halliday January 21, 2019 at 8:00 AM Very nice. Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2019 at 8:31 AM - Many thanks for visiting and comment, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gail Debole January 17, 2019 at 6:12 AM Well done! Love it. Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2019 at 2:35 PM - Many thanks for visiting and comment, Gail :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock January 14, 2019 at 10:39 AM One form I have never tried and congrats on your win. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2019 at 12:05 PM - This is my second Fibonacci poem, the last line is a bit difficult :) - Many thanks dear Phyllis, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May January 13, 2019 at 6:40 AM Congrats on your win Anne.. Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2019 at 12:01 PM - Many thanks Joseph, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden January 12, 2019 at 4:54 PM Superb Fibonacci, Anne-Lise, and so achingly beautiful ... blessings and congrats on your deserving win, my friend! :-) <3 Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2019 at 12:00 PM - Many thanks Gregory, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. January 12, 2019 at 1:33 PM Hi Anne-Lise, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2019 at 12:00 PM - Many thanks Alexis, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier January 12, 2019 at 1:30 PM Congrats on your top win, Sunshine. Well done. Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2019 at 12:00 PM - Many thanks Line, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France January 12, 2019 at 1:28 PM Anne-Lise congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing Fibonacci and I love the image too ~ Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2019 at 12:02 PM - Many thanks for choosing my poem, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire January 12, 2019 at 11:46 AM Bravo, Sunshine. This is such a different style from you and one senses the pain that emanates from each line. Excellent writing, dear. Congratulations on your first-place win in Dear Heart's contest. Hugs, Carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen January 12, 2019 at 12:40 PM - Many thanks dear Carolyn, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Valerie Staton January 10, 2019 at 3:09 PM Thoroughly enjoyed! Anne-Lise Andresen January 11, 2019 at 4:28 AM - Thank you very much, Valerie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Besma Riabi Dziri January 7, 2019 at 1:36 PM Though it is a freezing winter, the beauty and depth of your poem warms the heart and the soul.. and deserves the honour of POTD.. Congratulations Anne-Lise.. keep shining and smiling.. Love and hugs of a happy new year and blessings. Anne-Lise Andresen January 9, 2019 at 3:39 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Besma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Leon Datu January 7, 2019 at 12:35 PM A poem full of interest and deep phrases! Anne-Lise Andresen January 7, 2019 at 12:38 PM - Thank you very much, Leon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick January 7, 2019 at 9:56 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen January 7, 2019 at 12:11 PM - Many thanks for visiting and comment, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis January 7, 2019 at 7:08 AM Splendid writing dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx Anne-Lise Andresen January 7, 2019 at 7:10 AM - Many thanks for visiting and comment, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May January 6, 2019 at 11:36 AM This is great Sunshine well done my friend Anne-Lise Andresen January 6, 2019 at 2:13 PM - Many thanks for visiting and comment, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper January 6, 2019 at 9:55 AM nicely done, Sunshine, a great job on the Fibonacci verse. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`* Anne-Lise Andresen January 6, 2019 at 2:13 PM - Many thanks for visiting and comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravindra K Kapoor January 6, 2019 at 5:28 AM What a wonderful depth in your expressions of a cold where even tears freeze- Unknown in wilderness without qualification, even tears freeze to ice crystals". Beautiful and touching. My good wishes for your contest entry dear friend. With best wishes always....Ravindra K Kapoor Anne-Lise Andresen January 6, 2019 at 2:11 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Ravindra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. January 6, 2019 at 3:08 AM Hi Anne-Lise, Stunning imagery and deep content. Great write for the contest theme. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen January 6, 2019 at 2:11 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole January 5, 2019 at 10:48 PM Yes, even tears can freeze. This is beautiful and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Anne-Lise, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy Anne-Lise Andresen January 6, 2019 at 2:10 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Brandy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin January 5, 2019 at 8:12 PM Awesome, congratulations on POTD! Anne-Lise Andresen January 6, 2019 at 2:09 PM - Many thanks Tania, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley January 5, 2019 at 7:37 PM Returning with congratulations for your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors for your evocative poem. Warmest wishes always.. ~ Susan Anne-Lise Andresen January 6, 2019 at 2:08 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich January 5, 2019 at 6:43 PM Unbelievable to me how you fit 21 syllables on the last line. I could not finish mine last night because of that!! Anne-Lise Andresen January 6, 2019 at 2:08 PM - I will look for your suggestion ... a difficult line :)

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