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Even On Cloudy Days

chatter of bird song

   fills the morning air

        my alarm clock

I awaken to sunshine

     even on cloudy days

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Robert Pettit

March 15, 2013 at 10:18 PM

A natural alarm clock that needs no AC outlet or batteries. Nice way to describe those singing birds.

Andrea Dietrich

March 15, 2013 at 1:00 AM

gosh, how do you get sunshine even on those cloudy days. This is so nice to read, Francine. I think i have seen you posting on that tanka FB page but I never comment because I just have no time. Keep up with tanka writing. They are such a beautiful poetry form.