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Even In Separation

"i carry your heart with me(i carry it in my heart)i am never without it(anywhere i go you go . . . " ee Cummings Although we split up many years ago He lives with me today, forever a friend His heart is always beating with my own Reassuring my spirit that I’m never alone He doesn’t answer me when I ask a question Yet he seems to know the words to speak When I’ve had the displeasure of some defeat Encouraging me to try over and over again He isn’t sleeping beside me anymore at night But there is a certainty that he brings to me Feelings of pure enchantment that come through In my dreams, where he is always alive with me His love may have failed to stay beside me But it has never failed to remind me that I feel So sure that I have been loved without conditions With a love that stays with me long after separation November 1, 2019 Writing Challenge, November - Some Kind of Love - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode
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Agustin Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 8:16 AM
Thanks for sharing this piece... sincerely earnest. God bless you.
Na Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 1:41 AM
Congratulations Gina. this is well deserved
Chiri Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 9:12 PM
Regina this was a wonderful win reading beautifully!;) congratulations!;)
Sands Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 7:01 PM
Congratulations for your very nice win Gina :)
La France Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 4:15 PM
Gina, congratulations on your top win in my writing challenge with this moving poem, it is so true just because a relationship is over, can the two not remain friends loved !
Allison Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 1:58 PM
even when a relationship is over you can never forget the closeness you once shared, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 1:49 PM
- Congratulations on first place in the contest, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 1:14 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs Eve
Adams Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 3:39 PM
when two split those that can remain close are truly blessed....i love this Gina, love and hugs... :)
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