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'Angels ' Contest 

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Even Angels Have a Heart

The relentless rain ravished the old village.
No one dared to leave their warm homes.
Except for one dark-hooded human being
Zigzagging and hiding along paths and roads,
After leaving a bundle on a Convent step
And ringing quickly the nuns' bell.
Low amongst the ebony clouds, thunder rumbled.

Sister Clare immediately saw the bundle,
She heard the child's moan in acute fear.
She gathered the babe and rushed inside.
In her hurry, she left the heavy door ajar.
A lithe girl quickly entered behind the nun.

Sister Clare took the babe into the cosy kitchen.
Took off its wet wrappings and wiped the poor babe.
Then with another dry towel covered the infant.
She hurried to search for clothes and returned.
She stopped at the doorway for there a young girl stood.

“Who are you?”  The girl dressed in a white nightgown
Turned and smiled.  “I am Gabrielle,” she said.
The babe was fully dressed but rather quiet.
“Dressed her up, and baptised her White Rose.
Now it’s time to take her to the dimly lit chapel.”

Sister Clare and many other nuns followed, wondering.
Who is Gabrielle? Why did the baby make no noise? 
Gabrielle and her babe climbed the altar’s stairs slowly.  
“Jesus is kind and loves us all.  Now White Rose is His.”
A white aura of bright light surrounded the girl and babe.
Harps plucked in the most dulcet way and then all was dark.
Only the dead babe remained, lying in a basket on the altar.
From far away a few bells tolled a happy melody for all to hear.
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Jones Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 11:24 AM
Congratulations on another win Victor!
Kauffman Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 11:14 AM
Congratulations on your win, Victor. This poem does more than tug at the heartstrings. So sad, yet, so joyful! You did a wonderful job creating the story. Sending you blessings of Lenten renewal.
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 6:26 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Victor :) - hugs
Williams Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 5:29 AM
Dearest Victor, a beautifully haunting and deeply moving poem. The imagery is so vivid, drawing the reader into the stormy night and the mystery surrounding Gabrielle and White Rose. The poetic rhythm and suspenseful build-up create a sense of wonder, making the final revelation all the more powerful. Good luck in the contest ...Hugs
Rose  Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 4:10 AM
Thank you for joining my contest. It isn't easy writing about Angels. You all took it to a new level of consciousness for me. Each entry dove me closer to the thought that Angels exist. You are all winners in my book, grateful for all your efforts. May God bless your beautiful hearts, each and every one of you Love, Mystic
Greenhough Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 7:33 AM
A faith in heaven is evident. Sad but hopeful poem, good luck with the contest.
Singh Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 10:02 PM
A touching story very nicely penned
Gentile Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 5:47 AM
So very moving Victor! A beautiful story you have lovingly created!! Happy Saturday!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 4:57 PM
An interesting write. The child was meant to be found and readied for heaven.
Kendrick Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 4:40 PM
Interesting sad story told in poetic form. Thank you for sharing. Amazing what can happen in some of life's situations. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 3:42 PM
I like how it ended with her an angel in heaven. I hope your story gets s win
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 2:26 PM
Quite sad Victor , the only comfort is knowing she's gone to a better place. Tom
Buehler Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 12:58 PM
Victor, your story is tinged with sadness, but its gleams of God's grace make me smile. Nice writing. :)
Anaya Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 12:13 PM
Your storing telling impeccable, atmosphere, imagery and meaningful. It was heart-warming to have baptized the babe before reaching heaven's doors. Great entry!
Gifford Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 12:11 PM
Hello Victor, this is a very touching but beautiful write . I was hooked wishing there was more. Have a great day/evening my friend.
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 11:58 AM
- A beautiful but sad story, Victor - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Godwin Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 10:57 AM
Victor, oh, Talented Victor - you put a lot into this write unless, unlike me, you don't revise, revise and revise. Your stories tone in regard to the events and time period (I'm thinking any early AD century in France - is that just where my mind went?, or your intent?) comes across so clearly in my mind and feel. I am applauding you. Check 4th line down, 'the' should be 'on', I think. love ya ... CayCay
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